List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to ensure that I don't forget anything important and to save money. For example, when I go to the supermarket with my mother, I make a list to remember what she wants.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Oh yes, definitely. I usually make a list for my work to help me organize and focus. For example, I learn different skills on different days; on Monday, I practice speaking skills.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh, đồng thời trình bày ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn.

例: In my experience, some people don't like making lists because they don't have much time. They prefer to relax while working or shopping and don't want to be restricted by a list.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient. I use my phone every day, so having the list on it is easier for me.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I subbed to ensue that I don't forgot anything important and save my money for instant when I saw.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to ensure that I don't forget anything important and save my money for instance when I shop.

The word 'subbed' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'shop'. 'Ensue' should be 'ensure' meaning to make sure. 'Forgot' is past tense but should be present tense 'forget' after 'don't'. 'Instant' should be 'instance'. These corrections fix verb forms and word choice errors.

× To the supermarket with my mother.

✓ I go to the supermarket with my mother.

The original is a sentence fragment without a verb. Adding 'I go' completes the sentence structure.

× I will make a list to not forgot what my mother wants.

✓ I will make a list to not forget what my mother wants.

'Forgot' is past tense; after 'to' the base form 'forget' should be used.

× I usually make a list for my work to help me organize it and focus it on and it worked very effectively for example.

✓ I usually make a list for my work to help me organize it and focus on it, and it works very effectively, for example.

'Worked' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'works'. Also, 'focus it on' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'focus on it'.

× I will learn. Different skill in different day.

✓ I will learn different skills on different days.

Sentence fragments corrected by combining into one sentence. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match 'different'. 'Day' should be plural 'days' and preposition 'on' is used for days.

× Liontrust day I learn speaking skill and not to stainless.

✓ On Monday, I learn speaking skills and try not to be careless.

'Liontrust day' is unclear, likely 'Monday'. 'Speaking skill' should be plural 'speaking skills'. 'Not to stainless' is incorrect; likely intended 'not to be careless' or 'not to be distracted'.

× In my experience, some people don't like to make English because they don't have much time in.

✓ In my experience, some people don't like to make lists because they don't have much time.

'Make English' is incorrect; should be 'make lists'. 'Time in' is incorrect; 'have much time' is sufficient.

× They want to enjoy relaxing when they work or buy something and not focus on the list to make them more realize any joy able to time.

✓ They want to enjoy relaxing when they work or buy something and not focus on the list to make their time more enjoyable.

Sentence is awkward and unclear. Rephrased for clarity and correct word usage: 'joy able to time' corrected to 'more enjoyable'.

× I refer Michael is on my phone to paper because I think it's more convenient in affective because I use my phone tord day so Michael is on the phone is more convenience.

✓ I prefer making my list on my phone rather than on paper because I think it's more convenient and effective since I use my phone every day, so making lists on the phone is more convenient.

'Refer Michael is on my phone to paper' is incorrect; should be 'prefer making my list on my phone rather than on paper'. 'Affective' should be 'effective'. 'Tord day' likely 'today' or 'every day'. 'Michael' is incorrect word here.