List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you remember items and reduces stress while shopping.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need. This way, I don't have to worry about forgetting anything, and shopping becomes more efficient.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases and be specific about how making a list improves your productivity.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and save time. By listing tasks, I can focus on completing them efficiently, which increases my productivity and gives me a sense of satisfaction.

提案: Your answer is confusing and includes unnecessary phrases. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid adding irrelevant questions or statements that do not answer the examiner's question directly.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously. They believe that not having a list allows them to be more creative and flexible in their tasks.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. Try to explain your preference with specific reasons and contrast the two options logically.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me remember things better. Although using a phone is convenient since you can carry it anywhere, writing on paper feels more natural and effective for me.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because making a list will help to not down all my needs together and when I will go for shopping then I don't have to think much about the water to take and there may be a chance to forget about those things.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because making a list will help to note down all my needs together and when I go shopping then I don't have to think much about what to take and there may be a chance to forget those things.

The phrase 'help to not down' is incorrect; the correct form is 'help to note down' or simply 'help note down'. Also, 'when I will go for shopping' is incorrect; the future tense 'will' is not used after 'when' in this context, so it should be 'when I go shopping'. Additionally, 'about the water to take' seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice; it should be 'about what to take'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I do make a list of work because making a list will increase the productivity I believe because I know you want to save your time and implement as much as work you want to do in that in that time span and making a list will give you 1 satisfaction by taking it up.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of work because making a list will increase productivity, I believe, because I know you want to save your time and complete as much work as you want to do in that time span, and making a list will give you satisfaction by taking it up.

The phrase 'implement as much as work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'complete as much work'. Also, 'the productivity' should be 'productivity' without 'the' as it is uncountable here. The phrase '1 satisfaction' is unclear and should be 'satisfaction'. These corrections make the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× Making list is really recommended for everyone to stay organized but also it depends on person to person.

✓ Making lists is really recommended for everyone to stay organized but also it depends on person to person.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general concept of making lists. Also, 'on person to person' is missing the article 'a' before 'person'; however, since this is not in the problem list, it is not corrected here.

× I think they can do better work by not making a list.

✓ I think they can do better work by not making a list.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× I prefer to make a list on paper only because I feel it connects with my brain very smoothly, but on phone it will be better because you can bring it to anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper only because I feel it connects with my brain very smoothly, but on the phone it will be better because you can bring it anywhere.

The phrase 'bring it to anywhere' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring it anywhere' without 'to'. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on the phone' as 'phone' is a countable noun and requires the definite article here.