List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid repetition and unclear words. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the products I need. Moreover, it saves time as I can shop efficiently without forgetting anything. This method is very convenient and reduces unnecessary purchases.

提案: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making lists is effective for your work using linking words. Use specific examples or reasons to support your answer.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks because it helps me stay organized. For instance, by listing my tasks, I can prioritize them and complete my work efficiently. Therefore, making lists is an effective way to manage my responsibilities.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on giving a clear reason why some people dislike making lists. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unnecessary repetition. Keep your sentences simple and precise.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. They prefer to rely on their memory instead, thinking it is easier and faster. However, this approach can sometimes lead to forgetting important tasks.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using better linking words and avoiding repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the advantages of using a phone for lists with specific details.

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it allows me to easily add or remove items. For example, if I decide not to buy something, I can simply delete it. This flexibility makes managing my shopping list very convenient.

× I usually make a list whenever I go to show for shopping and it it helps me to find some productive which I want to why and it is very convenient because it saves my time as well as it is a good way to to.

✓ I usually make a list whenever I go shopping and it helps me to find some products which I want to buy and it is very convenient because it saves my time as well as it is a good way to do so.

The phrase 'go to show for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. 'Productive' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'products'. 'Want to why' is a mishearing or typo for 'want to buy'. The phrase 'a good way to to' is incomplete and should be 'a good way to do so'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I always made a make a list for my work and as well as to do some task it it it can be effective.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and also to do some tasks; it can be effective.

The phrase 'always made a make a list' is incorrect; 'always make a list' is correct to express habitual action in present tense. 'Some task' should be plural 'some tasks' to match the context. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people don't like to making list because they they think this is a waste of time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it is a waste of time.

The phrase 'don't like to making list' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists'. The verb 'like' is followed by gerund form 'making'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to generalize. 'They they' is a repetition error corrected to 'they'. 'This is' changed to 'it is' for better reference.

× It we can we can remind easily and they don't waste on time for Indiana. Making list.

✓ We can remind ourselves easily and they don't waste time making lists.

The phrase 'It we can we can remind easily' is unclear and corrected to 'We can remind ourselves easily' to use reflexive pronoun correctly. 'Waste on time' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'waste time'. 'For Indiana. Making list.' is unclear and corrected to 'making lists' to complete the thought.

× I always prefer to make a list on mobile phone because they have so much so many options to cut and add it.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it has so many options to cut and add items.

The pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers to 'mobile phone' which is singular; correct pronoun is 'it'. 'So much so many' is redundant; 'so many' is correct. 'Add it' is vague; 'add items' clarifies the meaning.

× And whenever we do not want to buy anything then we can I can cut that option and if I want to why a more thing then I can easily edit that.

✓ And whenever I do not want to buy anything, I can cut that option, and if I want to buy more things, I can easily edit the list.

The pronouns 'we can I can' are inconsistent; corrected to 'I can' to maintain subject consistency. 'Want to why' is a mishearing of 'want to buy'. 'A more thing' should be 'more things' to indicate plural. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.