List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar to make your answer clearer and more natural. For example, use 'list' instead of 'leash' and complete your sentences properly. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas effectively.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and what tasks I need to do at the market.

提案: Focus on completing your sentences and using correct grammar. Also, explain clearly how making a list helps you at work to provide more specific supporting details.

例: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work, especially when I feel confused. It helps me organise my tasks better and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Explain reasons logically and avoid unclear phrases like 'making lids' or 'that is an accessory'. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember tasks mentally instead.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Explain why paper is more convenient than a phone with specific reasons, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can write freely and quickly. Also, using paper is more convenient than using an app on my phone, especially when my phone battery is low.

× Yes, making a leash. Help me to memorize what I need to buy an what I need to do at the market.

✓ Yes, making a list helps me to memorise what I need to buy and what I need to do at the market.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and uses 'leash' instead of 'list'. The verb 'making' should be followed by a verb phrase to complete the sentence. Also, 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. 'An' is a typo for 'and'. The corrected sentence uses 'helps' to show the function of making a list and corrects spelling errors.

× Yes, sometimes. When I'm. When I feel confused, I make a list for my work an. Yeah, it's work.

✓ Yes, sometimes. When I feel confused, I make a list for my work. Yeah, it works.

The original sentence has incomplete sentence 'When I'm.' and uses 'an' instead of 'and'. Also, 'it's work' should be 'it works' to indicate that making a list functions well. The correction removes the incomplete sentence, fixes conjunction, and uses the correct verb form 'works' in present tense.

× I think. You don't like making lids becaused. That is an accessory. Things to do. It takes a lot of time to make a list.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it is an accessory task. It takes a lot of time to make a list.

The original sentence has 'lids' instead of 'lists', 'becaused' is incorrect, and the pronoun 'That' is unclear. The correction clarifies the subject by using 'some people', corrects spelling errors, and replaces 'That is an accessory' with 'it is an accessory task' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× I prefer making a list. On paper, because on paper I can write anything I want an. Using paper is more convenient app on my phone.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper because on paper I can write anything I want. Using paper is more convenient than an app on my phone.

The original sentence incorrectly splits the sentence and uses 'an' instead of 'than'. The correction combines the sentence properly, fixes the conjunction to 'than' for comparison, and corrects sentence structure for clarity.