List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və təbii ifadə çatışmazlığı var. Cümlələrinizi daha sadə və aydın qurmağa çalışın, həmçinin əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me save time. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I can quickly find what I need without forgetting anything, which makes me feel more comfortable.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və məntiqi əlaqə çatışmazlığı var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və əlavə məlumatları keçid sözləri ilə əlaqələndirin.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me focus on my tasks. For instance, when I have many goals, the list helps me manage my time better and complete tasks efficiently.

提案: Cavabınızda qeyri-dəqiqlik və təbii olmayan ifadələr var. Daha aydın və təbii cavab vermək üçün fikrinizi dəstəkləyən səbəblər və nümunələr əlavə edin, həmçinin gülüş kimi qeyri-rəsmi ifadələrdən çəkinin.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful to organize their tasks. For example, they may feel overwhelmed by seeing many tasks written down, which makes their work seem more challenging.

提案: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və qeyri-dəqiq ifadələr var. Cavabınızı daha təbii və aydın etmək üçün mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın, səbəbləri keçid sözləri ilə əlaqələndirin və lazımsız ifadələrdən çəkinin.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and portable. Also, I can easily edit the list anytime, which makes it more comfortable than using paper.

× When I'm going to shopping I'm doing the list which helped me in the shop and it keeps my time because when I go to the supermarket there are a lot of things and at least make me comfortable in the supermarket.

✓ When I'm going shopping, I make a list which helps me in the shop and saves my time because when I go to the supermarket there are a lot of things and it at least makes me comfortable in the supermarket.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' because 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form without 'to' when indicating an activity. Also, 'I'm doing the list' is unnatural; 'I make a list' is better. 'Which helped me' should be 'which helps me' to match present tense. 'It keeps my time' should be 'saves my time'. 'At least make me comfortable' should be 'at least makes me comfortable' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, probably. I think it works because when you have a lot of goals in your work at the least which you're doing.

✓ Yes, probably. I think it works because when you have a lot of goals in your work, at least you are doing some of them.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'At the least which you're doing' is incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'at least you are doing some of them' to convey the intended meaning. Also, present continuous 'you're doing' is appropriate here.

× It helps for decreasing time and it helps to focus.

✓ It helps decrease time and helps focus.

The phrase 'helps for decreasing time' is incorrect; 'help' is followed directly by the base verb without 'for'. Similarly, 'helps to focus' can be simplified to 'helps focus'.

× I think. It makes the work so challenging and it's difficult for their understanding.

✓ I think it makes the work so challenging and it's difficult to understand.

'Difficult for their understanding' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'difficult to understand'. Also, 'I think.' should be connected to the next sentence for clarity.

× That's why they don't like To Do List for your work ha ha.

✓ That's why they don't like to do lists for their work, ha ha.

'To Do List' should be 'to do lists' as a verb phrase. Also, 'for your work' should be 'for their work' to match the subject 'they'.

× A preferred to do the lease on my phone because phone takes a little place and I can take this list in any time.

✓ I prefer to do the list on my phone because the phone takes little space and I can access this list anytime.

'A preferred' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer'. 'Do the lease' is incorrect; it should be 'do the list'. 'Phone takes a little place' should be 'the phone takes little space'. 'Take this list in any time' should be 'access this list anytime'.

× Also I can change the list. Questionable anyway.

✓ Also, I can change the list. It's convenient anyway.

'Questionable anyway' is unclear and inappropriate here. Likely intended meaning is 'convenient' or 'comfortable'. Adding a comma after 'Also' improves sentence flow.

× That's why I think phone is more comfortable to do.

✓ That's why I think the phone is more comfortable to use.

'More comfortable to do' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'more comfortable to use'. Also, 'phone' should have the definite article 'the' here.