List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 중복 표현을 피하며, 문법적 정확성을 높이세요.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list so I don't forget any items. Sometimes I memorize the list, but when I have time, I write it down on my phone's notes app.

提案: 답변이 주제에 직접적으로 답하고 있으나, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 명확한 문장 구조와 적절한 어휘 사용으로 답변을 개선하세요.

例: Yes, I always make lists for work and studying. It helps me plan better and work more efficiently. Making lists is very helpful for me.

提案: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 이유를 명확히 설명하고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연결어를 사용하세요.

例: I think some people feel pressured or anxious when they have to make lists. Therefore, they prefer not to make lists because it stresses them out.

提案: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 끊어져 있어 자연스럽지 않습니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함하여 문장을 완성하세요.

例: I prefer to write my lists on my phone's notes app because it helps me refresh my mind. Most of the time, I use my phone to keep track of my tasks.

× I usually make a list for not not forgot forgetting about the items.

✓ I usually make a list so I don't forget about the items.

The phrase 'not not forgot forgetting' is incorrect. The correct form is 'so I don't forget' to express purpose and avoid double negatives.

× I usually memorize butts, but I when I have time I wrote down I shutting down in my chatting program with.

✓ I usually memorize, but when I have time, I write down and save it in my chatting program.

The verb 'wrote' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'write'. Also, 'shutting down' is incorrect here; 'save it' or 'store it' fits better.

× It makes me more plan and I can, I can work more efficiently.

✓ It helps me plan better and work more efficiently.

'More plan' is incorrect; 'plan better' is the correct adverbial form to describe improvement.

× It is the best advent tacious.

✓ It is the best advantage.

The phrase 'advent tacious' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'advantage'.

× I think something some people struggle with the pressure of list about.

✓ I think some people struggle with the pressure of making lists.

The phrase 'something some people' is redundant and 'pressure of list about' is incorrect; 'pressure of making lists' is correct.

× They got some anxious when they have to do something so I think they more preferred to don't making list.

✓ They get anxious when they have to do something, so I think they prefer not to make lists.

'Got some anxious' is incorrect; 'get anxious' is correct. 'More preferred to don't making list' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'prefer not to make lists'.

× I think I prefer to write down the notes in note.

✓ I think I prefer to write down notes in the Notes app.

'In note' is incorrect; the correct preposition and article usage is 'in the Notes app'.

× All for writing some by writing something I think I can. Refresh my mind so.

✓ By writing something, I think I can refresh my mind.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.