List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'make ensure' and 'should be there in the list'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget any items. This helps me shop efficiently and saves time.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly to connect ideas. Avoid unnecessary pauses and repetitions.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I need to complete all tasks by the end of the day. Writing them down helps me stay organized and remember everything I have to do.

提案: Your answer is too brief and lacks specific details. Try to explain reasons why some people might not like making lists, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally. Also, they might feel lists limit their flexibility.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to speak clearly and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. Also, avoid filler words and be more specific about the advantages of using a phone for lists.

例: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and portable. There are many apps that help me organize my tasks efficiently.

× I have to make ensure that all the items should be there in the list.

✓ I have to make sure that all the items are in the list.

The phrase 'make ensure' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make sure'. Also, 'should be there' is unnecessary and incorrect here; simply 'are in the list' is correct. Modal verb 'should' is not needed in this context.

× I do make a list when I go to shop

✓ I do make a list when I go shopping

The verb 'go' when followed by an activity uses the '-ing' form, so 'go shopping' is correct instead of 'go to shop'.

× Well, yes, I do make a list for my work 'cause as a currently I'm working for this company where I need to make sure that all the tasks need to be clear within the day.

✓ Well, yes, I do make a list for my work because currently I'm working for this company where I need to make sure that all the tasks are clear within the day.

The phrase 'as a currently' is incorrect; 'because currently' is appropriate. Also, 'tasks need to be clear' should be 'tasks are clear' to express the state of tasks clearly.

× All the tasks are should be written on the list that will make me remember what tasks I need to do.

✓ All the tasks should be written on the list; that will help me remember what tasks I need to do.

Using both 'are' and 'should be' together is incorrect. The modal verb 'should' alone is sufficient. Also, 'make me remember' is better expressed as 'help me remember'.

× Well, I guess that's depend on person to person whether he or she wants to make list or not.

✓ Well, I guess that depends on the person whether he or she wants to make a list or not.

'That's depend' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the subject 'that', so 'depends' is correct. Also, 'person to person' should be 'the person'. Additionally, 'make list' needs an article 'a' before 'list'.

× Well nowadays there are few many options available where we can make list.

✓ Well, nowadays there are many options available where we can make lists.

The phrase 'few many' is incorrect; it should be 'many'. Also, 'make list' should be pluralized to 'make lists' to match the plural 'options'.

× I suggest phone is the better option becauses phone we can carry anywhere.

✓ I suggest the phone is the better option because we can carry it anywhere.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; 'phone we can carry anywhere' should be 'we can carry it anywhere'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'phone'.

× So they are they sure there almost. Mini apps available in phone which helps to make list and notes as well.

✓ So, there are almost many mini apps available on the phone which help to make lists and notes as well.

The phrase 'they are they sure there almost' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'there are almost many'. Also, 'in phone' should be 'on the phone'. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'apps'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists'.