List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议练习完整且流畅的句子表达，避免重复和犹豫。

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议使用完整句子并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list before writing my essays. For example, I outline the structure and key points to organize my ideas effectively.

提案: 回答不完整且表达模糊，缺少具体内容和连贯性。建议给出具体原因并用完整句子表达。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and find lists restrictive.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体理由和连贯性。建议完整表达观点并提供具体原因。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.

× Because I always need to make sure which I.

✓ Because I always need to make sure which items I need.

句子结构不完整，缺少必要成分，导致表达不清。应补充完整内容，使句子完整通顺。

× Such as I read my structure and what, what? I, what I should write.

✓ For example, I review my essay structure and think about what I should write.

句子结构混乱，表达不完整。应调整句子结构，使表达清晰连贯。

× Maybe some people like to make a lists and some people.

✓ Maybe some people like to make lists and some people don't.

名词复数形式使用错误，'a lists'应为'lists'，且句子不完整，应补充完整。

× I prefer to make a list. Use my phone because with the development of technology.

✓ I prefer to make a list using my phone because of the development of technology.

句子断裂，缺少连接词，导致表达不完整。应合并句子并使用正确的介词短语。