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提案: Perbaiki pengucapan dan tata bahasa, serta hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'I I'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items, which is better for my health and budget.

提案: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Hindari kalimat terputus dan gunakan kalimat lengkap.

例: Usually, I follow my job description without making a list, but when my leader assigns me a special task, I write it down to ensure I complete it properly.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

例: I think some people prefer to memorize things instead of making lists, and that's fine because everyone has their own way of managing tasks.

提案: Perbaiki pengucapan dan tata bahasa, serta gunakan kalimat yang lebih lancar dan koheren. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung.

例: I used to make lists on paper because it was easier to carry, but nowadays I prefer using my phone since I can easily edit or delete the list after finishing my tasks.

× Yes I I always tell myself to make a list before I go shopping otherwise I will blindly shop everything that I see on the store an I think it's not healthy for me.

✓ Yes, I always tell myself to make a list before I go shopping; otherwise, I will blindly shop everything that I see in the store, and I think it's not healthy for me.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement issues and incorrect prepositions. 'I I' is a repetition error. 'on the store' should be 'in the store' because we use 'in' for enclosed spaces. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation to separate clauses for clarity.

× When it comes to work, I usually just do. Of my job description unless there is a special occasion. Where my leader? Assign me to a certain task that needs. For me to write it down.

✓ When it comes to work, I usually just do my job description unless there is a special occasion where my leader assigns me to a certain task that needs me to write it down.

The original sentences are fragmented and have punctuation errors. 'do. Of my job description' is incorrect; it should be 'do my job description'. The question mark after 'leader' is incorrect. The sentence should be combined properly to form a complete and coherent sentence.

× I think it's just some people are have their own. Way too. Memorizing things other than listing them on a note an I think that is OK because people are have their own way too. Cope with things.

✓ I think some people have their own way of memorizing things other than listing them on a note, and I think that is OK because people have their own way to cope with things.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb usage: 'are have' is incorrect; it should be 'have'. 'Way too' is misused; it should be 'way of'. Also, the sentence fragments need to be combined for clarity.

× I used to make a list on on the paper because I found it just more. Easy for me to bring. But this day I'd stick to using my phone because I can just undo it an UN take the whole thing after I done use it.

✓ I used to make a list on paper because I found it easier to bring, but these days I stick to using my phone because I can just undo it and take the whole thing off after I have used it.

The phrase 'on on the paper' has a repeated preposition and should be 'on paper'. 'Just more easy' is incorrect; it should be 'easier'. 'This day' should be 'these days' to indicate current habit. 'Undo it an UN take' is incorrect; 'undo it and take the whole thing off' is better. 'After I done use it' should be 'after I have used it' for correct tense.