List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，明确表达购物时制作清单的原因。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但句子结构不够流畅，部分语法错误。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。

例: Yes, I always make a list of my important tasks because I tend to forget them. Creating a schedule helps me organize my day efficiently and ensures I complete my work on time.

提案: 表达不够清晰，句子断裂，词汇使用不当。建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达不同类型的人不喜欢制作清单的原因。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they can manage their time well without them. Others prefer to be more flexible and spontaneous, so they avoid using lists.

提案: 回答内容基本完整，但表达不够自然，存在语法和用词错误。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好并说明原因。

例: Before university, I preferred making lists on paper because I didn't have a phone. Now, I use my phone because it's more convenient and I can record my voice, which saves time.

× Yes, I make a list to wine.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop.

这里的 'to wine' 是错误的表达，应该是 'when I shop'，表示购物时制作清单。原句中使用了错误的词语，导致句意不明。

× I shop because I. Always forget what I need to buy and buy another.

✓ I shop because I always forget what I need to buy and end up buying other things.

原句中断句不正确，'I.' 后面不应该断开，且 'buy another' 表达不完整，应该补充完整的意思。

× Things may be expensive or are useful at its width of a lot of money I think.

✓ Things may be expensive or useful, and they cost a lot of money, I think.

原句中 'its width of a lot of money' 语法错误且表达不清，应该改为 'they cost a lot of money' 来表达物品价格高。

× Yes, I always make a list of all my. Important the task because I always forget what I need to do.

✓ Yes, I always make a list of all my important tasks because I always forget what I need to do.

原句中断句错误，'all my. Important the task' 结构不正确，应该合并为 'all my important tasks'。

× And creating a schedule helps me organize my day efficiently and ensure that I complete my works on time.

✓ And creating a schedule helps me organize my day efficiently and ensures that I complete my work on time.

'works' 应为不可数名词 'work'，且主语是单数 'creating a schedule'，谓语动词应为 'ensures'。

× I think some people dislike McCain list because they can manage their time very well so they don't need the list.

✓ I think some people dislike making lists because they can manage their time very well, so they don't need a list.

'McCain list' 是错误拼写，应为 'making lists'，且 'the list' 改为 'a list' 更合适。

× And another. Kind of person they may or. More free and they are.

✓ And another kind of person may be more free and flexible.

原句断句混乱，语法结构不完整，需重组句子使其通顺。

× They preferred to be more flexible and spontaneous on the activities, so they also don't like the list.

✓ They prefer to be more flexible and spontaneous with activities, so they also don't like lists.

时态应为一般现在时 'prefer'，'on the activities' 应改为 'with activities'，'the list' 应改为复数 'lists'。

× Actually, before I go into the university, I prefer to do it on the paper because I don't have my own form.

✓ Actually, before I went to university, I preferred to do it on paper because I didn't have my own phone.

描述过去的情况，动词时态应为过去时，'go into the university' 改为 'went to university'，'prefer' 改为 'preferred'，'form' 应为 'phone'。

× But this time I have my own phone and I think it is more convenient during on the phone because we can record my voice.

✓ But now I have my own phone and I think it is more convenient to use the phone because we can record my voice.

'during on the phone' 语法错误，应改为 'to use the phone' 或 'on the phone'。

× It saves a lot of typing.

✓ It saves a lot of typing.

此句无语法错误，保持不变。