List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, this sometimes leads me to spend more than I planned.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa, làm giảm tính hiệu quả và tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy cố gắng giải thích rõ hơn về cách bạn sử dụng danh sách công việc.

例: Yes, I always make a list of tasks for my work, especially when I study. I allocate specific time slots, usually four hours, to focus on each task, which helps me stay organized and productive.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and complicated. They might prefer to handle tasks spontaneously rather than planning everything in advance.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích viết trên giấy.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better and stick to my plans more strictly.

× I'm not usually make a list before I go shopping because I kind of man.

✓ I don't usually make a list before I go shopping because I kind of...

The verb 'make' should be in base form after 'do not' for present tense negative sentences. 'I'm not usually make' is incorrect because 'am' is not used with 'usually' in this way. Use 'I don't usually make' instead.

× I will buy anything I'd like and see the prize when I go shopping.

✓ I will buy anything I like and see the price when I go shopping.

The phrase 'I'd like' is incorrect here; it should be 'I like' to express general preference. Also, 'prize' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'price' when referring to cost.

× I usually make a list of my work like to study.

✓ I usually make a list of my work, like studying.

The phrase 'like to study' after 'list of my work' is awkward. Using the gerund 'studying' fits better to express activities on the list.

× When I study, I will start in the. Particular time an in the. Time in in in 4 hour so that I will be more constrained shared on my study.

✓ When I study, I start at a particular time and study for about 4 hours so that I can be more focused on my study.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and prepositions ('start at a particular time', 'study for about 4 hours') improve clarity and grammar.

× I'm not sure but I think that people don't like making less because they will fight the fires will be more complicated than cost much time to make list before starting dual work.

✓ I'm not sure but I think that people don't like making lists because it can be more complicated and take much time to make a list before starting their work.

'Making less' should be 'making lists'. 'Fight the fires' is incorrect and unclear; replaced with 'it can be more complicated'. Also, 'cost much time' should be 'take much time'. 'Dual work' is unclear; replaced with 'their work'.

× I do prefer to make list on my paper because when I write to the paper is what will make me.

✓ I do prefer to make a list on paper because when I write on paper, it helps me

'Make list' needs an article 'a list'. 'On my paper' is better as 'on paper'. 'Write to the paper' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'write on paper'. The sentence is incomplete and corrected accordingly.

× Remember longer an stick to the plan. You're more strict.

✓ remember longer and stick to the plan. You are more strict.

'an' should be 'and'. 'You're' is a contraction of 'you are' and is acceptable but expanded here for clarity. The sentence is corrected for conjunction and clarity.