List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa yang mengganggu pemahaman. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan fokus pada alasan mengapa Anda membuat daftar belanja.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything important.

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan sulit dipahami karena kalimat yang tidak lengkap dan penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat. Cobalah untuk menjawab dengan kalimat yang jelas dan teratur, serta jelaskan bagaimana daftar tersebut membantu pekerjaan Anda.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work each day. It helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively.

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan banyak kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memberikan alasan yang lebih spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap serta kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they are not detail-oriented and prefer to work spontaneously without planning everything in advance.

提案: Jawaban Anda mengandung banyak kesalahan pengucapan dan tata bahasa yang membuatnya sulit dimengerti. Cobalah untuk menyatakan preferensi Anda dengan jelas dan jelaskan alasan Anda menggunakan kertas atau ponsel untuk membuat daftar.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, but sometimes I use paper because I find it easier to write things down quickly.

× Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping because that's remind me of a resources or thing that.

✓ Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping because that reminds me of resources or things that.

The verb 'remind' should be in the third person singular present form 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Also, 'a resources or thing' is incorrect; 'resources' is plural and should not have 'a'. Use 'resources or things' without 'a'.

× Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping because that's remind me of a resources or thing that.

✓ Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping because that reminds me of resources or things that.

The word 'resources' is plural and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context of multiple items.

× That I need a. To get on the store Ann. That will make me.

✓ Those are the things I need to get at the store, and that will help me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured into a complete sentence with proper clauses and conjunctions.

× Yes, I usually make a list a what I should do in this day at work up an usually at work, because I often.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of what I should do during the day at work, and usually at work, because I often...

The phrase 'a list a what' is incorrect; it should be 'a list of what'. Also, 'in this day' should be 'during the day' for correct preposition use.

× To my work as a timeline. I made and then I made a good. Resell anet.

✓ I organize my work as a timeline. I make it and then I create a good schedule.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. They need to be combined and clarified to convey the intended meaning.

× Because I don't think. Some people's like detail oriented, maybe there prefer to do randomly or just let it flow.

✓ Because I don't think some people are detail-oriented; maybe they prefer to do things randomly or just let it flow.

'People's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'people'. 'There' is incorrect pronoun; it should be 'they'. Also, 'detail oriented' should be hyphenated as 'detail-oriented'.

× And let's, uh, and maybe. Making list. Met people.

✓ And maybe making lists doesn't suit some people.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be rephrased to a complete sentence with correct pronouns and structure.

× I prefer micalis in pepper.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper.

The phrase 'micalis in pepper' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or typo. The correct phrase is 'making lists on paper'. The preposition 'on' is used with 'paper'.

× but usually I use phone to make a list to just simply because I bring my phone everywhere and anytime but is only pepper is a. Is a good choice for me.

✓ But usually I use my phone to make a list simply because I bring my phone everywhere and anytime, but only paper is a good choice for me.

The sentence has missing possessive pronouns ('my phone'), incorrect word order, and unclear phrases. 'Is only pepper' should be 'only paper'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.