List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

例: I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, if I forget something important, I might quickly note it down on my phone before going to the store.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your process clearly. Be specific about how making lists helps you.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. I prioritize the most important ones and complete them one by one, which improves my productivity.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it takes time and effort to write and check them. They might find it inconvenient to carry a notebook and pen or to update their lists regularly.

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but fragmented. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly. Provide specific reasons for your choice.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I make my list on my phone because I always have it with me. However, when I am at home, I prefer to write my list on paper in a traditional way.

× Not really, but when I was in this story I always. Think it about the head one. Of course, if he I didn't write it before, I don't have it. When I I am the store.

✓ Not really, but when I was in the store I always think about it ahead. Of course, if I didn't write it before, I don't have it when I am in the store.

The original sentence has multiple sentence fragments and unclear pronoun use, causing confusion. The phrase 'when I was in this story' should be 'when I was in the store'. 'Think it about the head one' is unclear and corrected to 'think about it ahead'. Also, 'if he I didn't write it before' is corrected to 'if I didn't write it before'. These corrections improve sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes. I usually do list to work because I don't want forward the things I have to.

✓ Yes. I usually make a list for work because I don't want to forget the things I have to do.

The phrase 'do list to work' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make a list for work'. Also, 'don't want forward the things' is incorrect; it should be 'don't want to forget the things'. Prepositions and verb choices are corrected to fit standard English usage.

× Who is the priorities of the day? And then I start doing their first one think. And finish it.

✓ I set the priorities of the day, and then I start doing the first thing and finish it.

'Who is the priorities' is incorrect; it should be 'I set the priorities'. 'Their first one think' is unclear and corrected to 'the first thing'. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× From my point, drive off. If you are, it's because of. The difficulty to do that because you need to have time to check it. Notebook a pen. And. After all of that, you need to.

✓ From my point of view, people avoid it because it is difficult to do. You need to have time to check it, a notebook, and a pen. After all of that, you need to be committed.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'From my point, drive off' is corrected to 'From my point of view, people avoid it'. The sentence about needing time and materials is restructured for clarity. The last sentence is completed to convey a full idea. These changes improve coherence and grammatical correctness.

× It depends. Sometimes I do my list on my phone because. I have it with me, but if I. Stay at home. If I were at home, I'll do it as a traditional way.

✓ It depends. Sometimes I make my list on my phone because I have it with me, but if I stay at home, I make it in the traditional way.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect conjunction use. 'Because.' should not end a sentence; it should connect to the next clause. 'If I. Stay at home.' is a fragment and corrected to 'if I stay at home'. 'If I were at home, I'll do it as a traditional way' mixes conditional forms and is corrected to 'if I stay at home, I make it in the traditional way'. These corrections improve sentence flow and grammatical accuracy.