List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều phần không liên quan và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại hoặc nói lan man.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only go shopping occasionally with my father. I prefer to buy things spontaneously rather than planning ahead.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng về việc bạn có làm danh sách công việc hay không và hiệu quả của nó.

例: I used to make a list for my work, but it didn't last long because I found it hard to keep track of all the tasks. So, I stopped making lists.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói lặp lại. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và có liên kết logic.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or unnecessary. In my opinion, lists are not always crucial and sometimes people prefer to be more flexible.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone when I need to buy things quickly. However, if I want to organize my tasks carefully, I write the list on paper and sometimes even draw diagrams.

× Ashley Sharp is not my like, you know, everyday activities.

✓ Ashley Sharp is not like my everyday activities, you know.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used here. The phrase should be 'like my everyday activities' to correctly express similarity. The original sentence misplaces 'my' leading to confusion.

× That's why I don't like my about the financial so.

✓ That's why I don't like thinking about financial matters so much.

The phrase 'I don't like my about the financial so' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The pronoun 'my' is misused and the sentence lacks a proper verb and object. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I used to make a lid for my work, but uh is it doesn't last too long because I would still like to see an.

✓ I used to make a list for my work, but it didn't last too long because I would still like to see it.

The word 'lid' is a typo for 'list'. Also, 'is it doesn't last' is incorrect; it should be 'it didn't last'. The phrase 'like to see an' is incomplete and unclear; 'like to see it' fits better. The quantifier and verb forms are corrected for clarity.

× I often cannot like a kid and done those words because.

✓ I often cannot like a kid and do those words because.

The phrase 'done those words' is incorrect; 'do those words' is more appropriate here. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear, but the correction focuses on pronoun and verb usage.

× It was too much, so I stopped doing that.

✓ It was too much, so I stopped doing that.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× They're just like me there too lazy.

✓ They're just like me; they're too lazy.

The word 'there' is incorrectly used instead of 'they're'. The sentence needs a semicolon or conjunction to separate the two clauses properly.

× I mean, I'm not support for the point that you shouldn't making list, but I think that it isn't that.

✓ I mean, I'm not supportive of the point that you shouldn't make a list, but I think that it isn't that important.

The phrase 'I'm not support for' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not supportive of'. Also, 'you shouldn't making list' should be 'you shouldn't make a list'. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× You know, you know, crucial because it doesn't affect my life that much.

✓ You know, it's not crucial because it doesn't affect my life that much.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'crucial'. Adding 'it's not' clarifies the meaning.

× If I have to make a list, I prefer make it on my phone.

✓ If I have to make a list, I prefer to make it on my phone.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the base form 'make'.

× If I have to go go go shopping and like buy it immediately immediately.

✓ If I have to go shopping and buy it immediately.

The repetition 'go go go' and 'immediately immediately' is unnecessary and incorrect. The sentence should be concise.

× But if I have to arrange an organize it, I have to write it on the paper and like sometimes I even draw a whole might not.

✓ But if I have to arrange and organize it, I have to write it on paper, and sometimes I even draw a whole map.

The phrase 'an organize' should be 'and organize'. 'Write it on the paper' is better as 'write it on paper'. 'Draw a whole might not' is incorrect; likely intended 'draw a whole map'.