List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點不自然且語意不清楚，建議你用簡單明確的句子直接回答問題，並用連接詞組織句子，使回答更流暢。例如，可以先說明不做購物清單，接著說明原因，最後補充感受。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I see shopping as a form of entertainment. Therefore, I just enjoy browsing without a fixed goal, which makes the experience more relaxing.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不清楚，建議你先直接回答是否做工作清單，再用連接詞說明清單的效果，並具體描述工作中遇到的突發狀況。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to keep track of tasks. However, sometimes unexpected issues happen, so I have to adjust my plans quickly.

提案: 你的回答不夠清楚且有語言錯誤，建議你先明確說明原因，再用連接詞補充細節，並避免使用不確定或不完整的句子。

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer to enjoy the process without strict goals. Also, they may feel uncertain about the future and don't want to be restricted by plans.

提案: 回答中有語法和用詞錯誤，建議你先直接回答偏好，再用連接詞說明原因，並用簡單句子表達不帶工作回家的想法。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I usually schedule work tasks this way. I don't like to bring work home, so writing lists on paper helps me leave work at the office.

× No, I usually won't make a list where sharp pain.

✓ No, I usually don't make a list when shopping.

The modal verb 'won't' is incorrectly used here to express habitual action. 'Usually' indicates a habitual action, so the simple present tense with 'don't' is appropriate. Also, 'where sharp pain' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'when shopping' fits the context better.

× I actually I consider shopping as an entertainment, so I just enjoy the process and I won't really say that goes like I need to buy.

✓ Actually, I consider shopping as entertainment, so I just enjoy the process and I don't really say that I need to buy anything.

The sentence has redundancy ('I actually I') and awkward phrasing ('say that goes like I need to buy'). Correcting to a clearer structure improves understanding. 'Won't' is replaced with 'don't' to express habitual action.

× Actually, it won't really say the goal and saying that I should buy some.

✓ Actually, I don't really set a goal or say that I should buy something.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. 'It won't really say' is incorrect; the speaker should be the subject. Also, 'some' is vague; 'something' is more appropriate here.

× I usually will make a list for my work to ensure everything is in everything is in process.

✓ I usually make a list for my work to ensure everything is in process.

'Usually will' is redundant; 'usually' with simple present is sufficient to express habitual action. Also, the phrase 'everything is in everything is in process' is repetitive; corrected to 'everything is in process'.

× However, sometimes. My job will easily find it very easilly have a lot of like accidence like just immediately happen and I need to feedback lemme quickly.

✓ However, sometimes my job is very unpredictable and accidents happen immediately, so I need to give feedback quickly.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases ('will easily find it very easilly have a lot of like accidence'). Rewriting for clarity and correct grammar is necessary.

× In my opinion, some people don't like to make a list for their job offer shop is because they just enjoy the process and they don't really like to set a goal for everything.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like to make a list for their job or shopping because they just enjoy the process and don't really like to set a goal for everything.

The phrase 'job offer shop is' is incorrect; it should be 'job or shopping'. The preposition 'for' is correctly used before 'their job or shopping'.

× So I think and sometimes because future is really have four of those things you're unsure Souleymane just don't like to follow a.

✓ So I think sometimes, because the future is uncertain, people just don't like to follow a list.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it with proper sentence structure and clarity is necessary.

× I prefer to make a list on paper things.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper.

The phrase 'on paper things' is incorrect. 'Make lists on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'prefer to make a list' is better as 'prefer to make lists' for general preference.

× I usually schedule things on for job not in my free time.

✓ I usually schedule things for work, not in my free time.

The preposition 'on for' is incorrect; 'for' is appropriate here. Also, 'job' is better replaced with 'work' in this context.

× And I really don't like to bring my work home, so I like to write down the US listings I'm down on paper so I can just leave it in company.

✓ And I really don't like to bring my work home, so I like to write down the listings on paper so I can just leave them at the company.

'US listings I'm down' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'listings on paper'. 'Leave it in company' is incorrect; 'leave them at the company' is correct pronoun and preposition usage.