List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Mu giswahili, gerageza kuvuga mu buryo burambuye kandi butomoye. Koresha imvugo ihuza ibitekerezo byawe neza kandi wirinde gusubiramo amagambo. Urugero, ushobora kuvuga impamvu zitandukanye zituma ukora urutonde mu buryo burambuye kandi ukoreshe amagambo ahuza interuro.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget essential items. Additionally, it helps me stick to my budget and avoid impulse purchases. Sometimes, I even categorise items by type, which makes shopping more efficient.

提案: Mu giswahili, gerageza gukoresha imvugo isobanutse kandi yuzuye. Koresha amagambo ahuza ibitekerezo kandi usobanure neza uko urutonde rukora ku kazi kawe. Irinde amakosa y'imyandikire n'imvugo zidahuye n'icyo ushaka kuvuga.

例: Yes, I make a list of my work tasks, which helps me manage my time effectively. For example, when I had many tests, I prioritised the most important ones to complete first, ensuring I met all deadlines.

提案: Mu giswahili, gerageza kuvuga mu buryo bwumvikana kandi utavugamo amagambo asubirwamo. Sobanura impamvu neza kandi ukoreshe amagambo ahuza interuro. Irinde gukoresha imvugo zidahuye n'icyo ushaka kuvuga.

例: I believe some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming. They prefer to start tasks immediately rather than spending time creating a list.

提案: Mu giswahili, gerageza kuvuga mu buryo burambuye kandi usobanure impamvu y'icyo ukunda gukoresha. Koresha amagambo ahuza ibitekerezo kandi wirinde amagambo y'ikirahure cyangwa atuzuye.

例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, making it easy to access. For shopping lists, this method helps me avoid losing the list and keeps everything organised.

× So that I don't forget anything that I need to buy.

✓ So that I don't forget anything I need to buy.

The phrase 'that I need to buy' is unnecessary here and makes the sentence awkward. Omitting 'that' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Uhm, I also. Do this to make sure I stay on a budget and also it helps to avoid impulse buying.

✓ Uhm, I also do this to make sure I stay on a budget, and it also helps to avoid impulse buying.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Combining the fragments into one sentence with proper conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes I categorise.

✓ Sometimes I categorise items.

The verb 'categorise' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'items' clarifies what is being categorised.

× I think it actually works because it helps in time management and this plane.

✓ I think it actually works because it helps with time management and planning.

The phrase 'this plane' is incorrect and unclear. Replacing it with 'planning' corrects the meaning and fits the context.

× I remember in example at time when I had a lot of test so I would put the one that was had a more priority.

✓ I remember, for example, a time when I had a lot of tests, so I would put the ones that had more priority first.

The original sentence has multiple errors including missing articles, incorrect verb forms, and unclear phrasing. Adding articles, correcting verb forms, and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I think some people I think some people don't like making lists becauses they find it time consuming and they would rather start doing that task immediately then waste time on.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and would rather start doing the task immediately than waste time actually making the lists.

The sentence has repetition, incorrect conjunctions ('then' should be 'than'), and incomplete phrases. Correcting these improves sentence coherence and grammatical accuracy.

× I would definitely use my phone to make a list. UM, if it's a shopping and grocery list, of course I would lose my phone because I have my phone the whole time so it's easier for access.

✓ I would definitely use my phone to make a list. Um, if it's a shopping and grocery list, of course I wouldn't lose my phone because I have it with me the whole time, so it's easier to access.

The original sentence incorrectly states 'I would lose my phone' which contradicts the intended meaning. Also, 'easier for access' should be 'easier to access'. Correcting these prepositions and modal verb usage clarifies the meaning.