List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免口语化的错误表达。可以用更完整的句子表达原因。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy when I am at the supermarket.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me finish tasks on time. After completing each task, I check it off my schedule, which makes me feel satisfied.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，且内容不够具体。建议用更准确的词汇表达原因，并且句子要完整。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed if they cannot complete all the tasks on time.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有重复词汇和语法小错误。建议避免重复，使用更正式的表达。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to delete unnecessary items that I no longer need to do.

× Yes, I will make a list when I shop 'cause I easily forgot what do I need to buy when I am in a supermarket.

✓ Yes, I will make a list when I shop 'cause I easily forget what I need to buy when I am in a supermarket.

这里的错误是时态使用不当。句中使用了过去式“forgot”，但句意表达的是一般现在时的习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”。此外，疑问句“what do I need to buy”在陈述句中应改为“what I need to buy”。建议将“forgot”改为“forget”，并调整句子结构。

× Yes, I will make a list for my work and I think it really helped me to finish my work on time and when I. Finish the work I will make a take on my schedule and which makes me really happy to all I don't ever.

✓ Yes, I will make a list for my work and I think it really helps me to finish my work on time. When I finish the work, I will take a break on my schedule, which makes me really happy.

句中“helped”使用了过去式，但根据上下文应使用一般现在时“helps”。“when I. Finish”中“Finish”首字母不应大写且句子结构不完整，应改为“when I finish”。“make a take on my schedule”表达不清，应改为“take a break on my schedule”。建议调整时态和句子结构，使表达更清晰。

× I guess Tim a afraid of they cannot finish the task on time and also just make a list may make them feeling very stressed and. Not fill.

✓ I guess some people are afraid that they cannot finish the task on time, and also just making a list may make them feel very stressed and not fulfilled.

句中“Tim a afraid of they”结构错误，应为“some people are afraid that they”。“make a list”后应使用动名词“making”作为主语。“make them feeling”应改为“make them feel”。“Not fill”应为“not fulfilled”。建议调整代词使用和动词形式，使句子通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause I can easily delete some unnecessary unnecessary things that have already no need to do.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause I can easily delete some unnecessary things that I no longer need to do.

句中“have already no need to do”表达不正确，应改为“I no longer need to do”或“that are no longer needed”。此外，“unnecessary”重复出现，应删除一个。建议调整介词和表达方式，使句子更自然。