List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to form complete sentences and avoid unclear words like 'winsock' and 'into bed'. Also, explain briefly why making a list helps you stay organized, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I definitely make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. This way, I don't forget any items and I can shop more efficiently.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by completing incomplete sentences and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repetition and add a little more detail about how the app helps you.

例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks accurately. I use an app to check off items, which motivates me as I can see my progress clearly.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'make less' and 'make place'. Try to use correct plural forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Moreover, they believe they have a good memory and can remember things without writing them down.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has unclear phrases like 'carry the lease' and 'by informed'. Try to complete your sentences and explain clearly why you prefer your phone, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient than paper. I can carry it anywhere, easily edit or reschedule tasks, and even share the list with others.

× Yes definitely I make a list winsock because while making list I can. Into bed I don't forward anything for to buy. And also it helps to stay. Organize with me.

✓ Yes, definitely I make a list because while making a list I can avoid forgetting anything to buy. And also it helps me to stay organized.

The original sentence contains incomplete and unclear phrases such as 'winsock', 'Into bed I don't forward anything for to buy', and 'helps to stay. Organize with me'. These seem to be errors or mispronunciations. The corrected sentence uses the present participle 'making' correctly and clarifies the meaning. The phrase 'while making a list' is correct usage of the present participle form to indicate an action happening simultaneously.

× Some individual doesn't like to make less because they think it is time consuming.

✓ Some individuals don't like to make lists because they think it is time-consuming.

The word 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match the plural verb 'don't'. Also, 'less' is incorrect; the correct word is 'lists'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Some individual doesn't like to make less because they think it is time consuming.

✓ Some individuals don't like to make lists because they think it is time-consuming.

The subject 'Some individual' is singular but the verb 'don't' is plural. To maintain subject-verb agreement, 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match 'don't'. Also, 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'.

× So because of that reason many individual don't like to make place.

✓ So because of that reason many individuals don't like to make lists.

'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with 'many'. 'Place' is incorrect; the intended word is 'lists'.

× They mostly rely on themselves and they said they have good memory to remember anything.

✓ They mostly rely on themselves and say they have a good memory to remember anything.

The verb tense 'said' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'say'. Also, 'good memory' needs the article 'a' before it.

× I had to make a list on my phone because it is quite convenient to carry the lease rather than.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is quite convenient to carry the list rather than paper.

The phrase 'I had to make' implies past obligation, but the context is about preference, so 'I prefer to make' is appropriate. 'Lease' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'list'. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× Paper because. It is more convenient and we can carry anywhere we go an. By informed, we can also change an. Reschedule the list and we can also set it with anyone. So I.

✓ Paper because it is more convenient and we can carry it anywhere we go. By using the phone, we can also change and reschedule the list and share it with anyone.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The corrected version combines the ideas into complete sentences with proper structure and clarity. 'By informed' is corrected to 'By using the phone'. 'Set it with anyone' is corrected to 'share it with anyone' for clarity.