List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more clear and structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk when I didn't make a list, so now I always prepare one.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and explain how making a list helps you. Avoid incomplete or repeated phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain the effect.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. I write down three tasks I want to complete tomorrow because it helps me organize my day and stay focused.

提案: Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid hesitation sounds like 'ha ha' in formal speaking. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom to choose what to do during the day.

提案: Make your answer more fluent and clear. Use correct phrases and avoid unclear words like 'convertible'. Explain your preference with specific reasons and examples, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to add or delete items quickly. For example, if I remember something later, I can easily update my list on the phone.

× A list of my thing before I oh before I go to shop I do a list for things that I need to buy that be for example when when did that help me to to buy?

✓ A list of my things before I, oh before I go shopping. I make a list of things that I need to buy. For example, when I do that, it helps me to buy certain things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form. The sentence structure was fragmented and unclear, so it was corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× before I oh before I go to shop

✓ before I go shopping

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' using the verb + -ing form to indicate the activity.

× I do a list for things that I need to buy that be for example when when did that help me to to buy? Certain things when I didn't do like this.

✓ I make a list of things that I need to buy. For example, when I do that, it helps me to buy certain things. When I don't do this,

The phrase 'that be' is incorrect and unclear; it was removed for clarity. Also, 'did that help me to to buy?' is grammatically incorrect and was rephrased. The plural 'things' is correct here.

× Yes. Which one are you? Each day I write three things. What I need to I what I want to do tomorrow and that that that make all my day in order and. For example. When I, when I, when anything.

✓ Yes. Every day, I write three things that I need to do or want to do tomorrow, and that makes my whole day organized. For example, when I...

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It was restructured to form complete, coherent sentences. 'That that that make' is incorrect; 'that makes' agrees with the singular subject 'that'.

× that that that make all my day in order

✓ that makes my whole day organized

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that' (third person singular).

× People did not like To Do List because that made that give them. There is no any option to do.

✓ People do not like to-do lists because they feel it gives them no options to choose from.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to 'to-do lists'; 'they' is the correct pronoun. Also, 'There is no any option' is incorrect; it should be 'no options'. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to do a listing on my phone because for me it's easy.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because for me it's easy.

The phrase 'do a listing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make a list'. Also, 'on my phone' is correct preposition usage here.

× How it is easy to make me convertible when I want to delete anything?

✓ It is easy for me to make changes when I want to delete anything.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'make me convertible' incorrectly. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and clearer expression.

× Or why anyway I want to add anything? For example, in case for any accident or any.

✓ Or whenever I want to add anything. For example, in case of any accident or other situations.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It was restructured to form complete sentences with correct prepositions and conjunctions.