List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和不连贯，建议回答时直接表达观点，并用具体细节支持，同时避免无意义的填充词。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping to ensure I don't forget anything. For example, I write down all the items I need whether I go to a grocery store or a supermarket.

提案: 回答时应更连贯，避免断断续续，清晰表达观点并用完整句子说明理由。

例: Yes, I often make lists for work, especially when attending conferences, because it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议用完整句子表达观点，并给出具体原因，避免语法错误。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down, or they find lists restrictive.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议用完整句子清楚表达偏好并说明原因。

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I am not very organized and often lose paper lists, so using my phone is more convenient.

× what I usually do is like writing.

✓ what I usually do is writing.

这里的结构是 'do is + 动名词'，不需要加 'like'，因为 'like' 在这里用法不正确。应直接用动名词形式表示习惯动作。

× no matter where I go to grocery store or the supermarket.

✓ no matter whether I go to the grocery store or the supermarket.

'go to grocery store' 缺少冠词，且 'no matter where' 后面应接完整的选择结构，使用 'whether' 更合适。

× Is specially attending. Conference.

✓ I am specially attending a conference.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'Is' 应为 'I am'，'Conference' 前应加冠词 'a'。

× Because it helps me remember. What I should do?

✓ Because it helps me remember what I should do.

此处不应断句，'Because' 引导的原因状语从句应与主句连贯，且疑问句改为陈述句。

× That some people may don't enjoy making lists.

✓ That some people may not enjoy making lists.

情态动词 'may' 后面应接动词原形，不能加 'don't'，应改为 'may not'。

× People like me. Uh, who may think they are intelligent?

✓ People like me, who may think they are intelligent.

此处应为定语从句，不能用疑问句形式，句末应为逗号连接。

× And they can use their brain to.

✓ And they can use their brain.

句子末尾多余 'to'，应去掉。

× Because all I'm not a kind of organized the person.

✓ Because I'm not the kind of organized person.

'all' 用法错误，且 'a kind of' 后不加定冠词 'the'，应为 'the kind of'。

× As I'm in lose my paper if I write list some on it.

✓ Because I might lose my paper if I write a list on it.

句子结构混乱，'As I'm in lose' 不合语法，应改为 'Because I might lose'，且 'write list some on it' 应为 'write a list on it'。