List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by using complete sentences and linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. For example, you can say: "Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it is easier and more convenient than trying to remember everything. I usually refer to the list to make sure I don't forget any important items."

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, I check the list frequently to ensure I don't miss any important items, which makes shopping more efficient.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with logical details using linking words. For example, say: "Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and prioritize tasks. By writing down what needs to be done first, I can manage my time better."

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and avoid wasting time. By writing down my tasks, I can prioritize which ones to complete first, making my work more efficient.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons using linking words. For example: "In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it takes time to write down everything they need, especially when they have many tasks."

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it takes time to write down all the things they want to do. For example, when they have many tasks, it can be tiring to organize them on a list.

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains fragmented sentences. Try to speak in full sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example: "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. I can easily access my list anytime and check what I need to do first."

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. For example, I can quickly open my phone and check my list whenever I need to, which helps me stay organized.

× For me it is more easier and more convenient than trying to remember everything.

✓ For me it is easier and more convenient than trying to remember everything.

The word 'easier' is already a comparative form, so adding 'more' before it is incorrect. Use either 'easier' or 'more convenient' but not 'more easier'.

× For example, I will keep quickly. Refer to the list. To make sure I don't forget any important items.

✓ For example, I will quickly refer to the list to make sure I don't forget any important items.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. Combining them into one sentence with correct word order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course it is work.

✓ Yes, of course it works.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'making a list for your work', which is a singular subject requiring the verb 'works' in third person singular form, not 'is work'.

× Because for me it helps me stay organized and avoid wasting time.

✓ Because it helps me stay organized and avoid wasting time.

The phrase 'for me' is redundant when 'it helps me' is already used. Removing 'for me' makes the sentence clearer and more natural.

× Ask By writing down my tasks, I can profess my.

✓ By writing down my tasks, I can prioritize them.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Ask' is misplaced and 'profess my' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely about prioritizing tasks, so the correction reflects that.

× Has that have to be done first?

✓ I can decide which tasks have to be done first.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding a subject and verb clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I mention I think it's for good thing.

✓ I think it's a good thing.

The phrase 'I mention' is unnecessary and 'for good thing' is incorrect. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× For my opinion, I think people don't like making this because it takes a lot of time, for example when you are.

✓ In my opinion, I think people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time, for example when you are.

The correct preposition is 'in my opinion' not 'for my opinion'. Also, 'making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer.

× Trying to shut down all the things you want. Dual at on dead date. Eat. Will take a lot of time.

✓ Trying to write down all the things you want to do at one deadline will take a lot of time.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain nonsensical phrases. The correction combines and clarifies the intended meaning with proper grammar.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient. For example, I can directly. Go to my. Go through my phone and look at what I have to print I first.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient. For example, I can directly go through my phone and look at what I have to do first.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them and correcting word choice improves clarity and grammatical correctness.