List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về lợi ích cụ thể của việc lập danh sách khi đi mua sắm.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need. For instance, last week I saved time and avoided buying unnecessary items by following my list carefully.

提案: Bạn nên cải thiện cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về cách danh sách giúp bạn trong công việc hoặc học tập.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it keeps me organized. For example, when studying, I list all the topics I need to review, which helps me manage my time effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. They prefer to spend their time doing other activities instead of writing lists.

提案: Bạn cần tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu cho đầy đủ ý. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để lập danh sách.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. For example, I can easily add or remove items anytime, and I don't have to carry a paper list with me.

× I always make a list when I go in shop go shopping because it is very vital for me to make a list.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping because it is very vital for me to make a list.

The phrase 'go in shop go shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb in the present participle form to indicate the activity of shopping.

× It helps me to remember and know what we have to buy when we go shopping.

✓ It helps me to remember and know what I have to buy when I go shopping.

The pronoun 'we' is inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. Since the speaker is talking about their own shopping, 'I' should be used to maintain consistency.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work be it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important in my work.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important in my work.

The phrase 'be it' is incorrect here; the correct conjunction is 'because' to show cause and effect.

× Especially in my study. It helps me to check again everything that I need in my studying. Is wait.

✓ Especially in my studies, it helps me to check everything I need for studying again.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think there are many people they will think making list is a voice of tent.

✓ I think many people think making a list is a waste of time.

The phrase 'they will think' is redundant after 'I think many people'. Also, 'voice of tent' is a mishearing or typo for 'waste of time'. Pronouns and phrases need correction for clarity.

× So they will decide not to making list.

✓ So they decide not to make a list.

After 'decide not to', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× It will took a lot of state and and it will waste the time and they want to have a lot of time to do another things.

✓ It takes a lot of effort and wastes time, and they want to have more time to do other things.

'Will took' is incorrect; 'takes' is the present tense form. Also, 'state' is likely a typo for 'effort'. 'Another things' should be 'other things'.

× From my perspective perspective, I preferred to make a list on my phone because it is really convenient for me and it will.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is really convenient for me.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context suggests present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'perspective' is repeated unnecessarily.

× It will and it helps me a safe more times to make a list on my.

✓ It helps me save more time when I make a list on my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing it into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.