List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺乏完整句子和逻辑。建议练习用完整句子表达购物时制作购物清单的习惯，并使用连接词使回答更自然。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on paper because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答语法和表达混乱，难以理解。建议用完整句子说明工作中制作清单的习惯及其效果，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly, so I can complete them efficiently each day.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，缺乏具体原因。建议明确说明为什么有些人不喜欢制作清单，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too strict or time-consuming, which makes them feel pressured.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子比较手机和纸质清单的优缺点，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to use and I can quickly check and update it, unlike paper lists which are less convenient.

× Yes, I. I write love paper.

✓ Yes, I write a list on paper.

句子结构混乱，缺少完整表达。应明确表达“我在纸上写清单”，使句子完整通顺。

× I can see love.

✓ I can see it.

“love”用法错误，应使用指代清单的代词“it”。

× I want to buy something.

✓ I want to buy something.

句子本身无语法错误，保持原句。

× 'Cause list can clear true my drop I can see today I can and do something to my job.

✓ Because the list can clear my tasks, I can see what to do today and complete my work.

句子结构混乱，表达不清。应调整语序和用词，使句子表达清晰完整。

× Some people say something think list is very must so she and people don't like. Make list.

✓ Some people think making a list is very necessary, but they don't like to make lists.

代词使用错误，句子不完整且表达混乱。应使用正确代词并调整句子结构。

× I like to mark to my phone becauses Rory.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because it's easy to use.

介词使用错误，“mark to my phone”应改为“make a list on my phone”，并修正拼写错误。

× Easy to use I can see, but in paper I think is not varying quickly see.

✓ It's easy to use and I can see it clearly, but on paper, I think it's not as quick to see.

句子结构混乱，表达不清。应调整语序和用词，使句子通顺易懂。