List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pengucapan agar kalimat lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan hindari pemenggalan kalimat yang tidak perlu.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from making impulsive purchases.

提案: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan efektif. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kesalahan tata bahasa.

例: Yes, I use a To-Do List to plan my work. It helps me work more efficiently, save time and energy, and meet my deadlines.

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan kosakata dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan mudah dipahami. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu.

例: Some people may dislike making lists because it takes time to set them up at first. However, I believe lists help reduce stress and save time and energy in the long run.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pengucapan agar kalimat lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas serta hindari kesalahan pengucapan.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible. Sometimes, I also set reminders to help me with my work.

× I usually make a list for it because it makes me. Easy to remember what I should purchase an don't make me impulsive to buy something that I don't need.

✓ I usually make a list because it makes it easy for me to remember what I should purchase and prevents me from impulsively buying things I don't need.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and punctuation, causing confusion. 'Makes me. Easy' should be combined into 'makes it easy for me'. 'An' is a typo for 'and'. The phrase 'don't make me impulsive' is better expressed as 'prevents me from impulsively buying'. Improving sentence flow and clarity is necessary.

× I usually use my To Do List for set up my plan for. Starting my work to make it more efficiency and save my time and energy and keep my goal on time.

✓ I usually use my To Do List to set up my plan for starting my work to make it more efficient, save my time and energy, and keep my goals on time.

The phrase 'for set up' is incorrect; it should be 'to set up' to indicate purpose. 'More efficiency' should be 'more efficient' as an adjective describing the work. 'Keep my goal on time' is better as 'keep my goals on time' for plural consistency and clarity.

× I yes I think it might chew cut your time and make you harder to set up it in this beginning for your work.

✓ Yes, I think it might cut your time and make it harder for you to set up at the beginning of your work.

The phrase 'chew cut your time' is incorrect and unclear; 'cut your time' is appropriate. 'Make you harder to set up it' is ungrammatical; it should be 'make it harder for you to set up'. 'In this beginning for your work' should be 'at the beginning of your work' for correct preposition and phrasing.

× But I really trust it will help you to reduce your stress and save your energy and time for the next.

✓ But I really believe it will help you reduce your stress and save your energy and time for the next tasks.

'Trust' is less appropriate here; 'believe' fits better. 'Help you to reduce' can be simplified to 'help you reduce'. 'For the next' is incomplete; adding 'tasks' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on phone instead of on paper becauses it's more. Is it to use an? Assessable for me an sometime I can use my phone to set a reminder to help me about my work.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone instead of on paper because it's easier to use and accessible for me, and sometimes I can use my phone to set reminders to help me with my work.

'On phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'Becauses' is a typo for 'because'. 'Is it to use an?' is unclear and should be 'easier to use'. 'Assessable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'accessible'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Help me about my work' should be 'help me with my work' for correct preposition usage.