List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“going shopping”应为“go shopping”，“await forgetting”应为“avoid forgetting”。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. For example, by writing down the items, I can avoid forgetting anything important. This way, I can shop more efficiently and avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: 回答中语法和表达混乱，难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接支持细节，确保表达清晰。

例: Yes, I definitely make a list at the beginning of my workday. For example, when I am busy, the list helps me know what tasks I need to complete throughout the day.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，词汇使用错误严重，建议先理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，并给出具体原因。

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things in their head.

提案: 回答中多处拼写和语法错误，如“make a legs”应为“make a list”，“It's can more convenience”应为“It's more convenient”。建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. For example, I can set reminders for the items, which paper lists cannot do. Also, paper lists can be easily lost if not handled carefully.

× Yes, I always make a list when I going shopping.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping.

这里的动词go应该用原形，因为前面有助动词always make，后面是时间状语从句，谓语动词应使用一般现在时。

× For example, by writing down the items I can await forgetting anything important at the same time while shopping.

✓ For example, by writing down the items I can avoid forgetting anything important while shopping.

这里的动词await用法错误，应使用avoid表示避免。

× This way I can shop more efficiently and avoid unnecessary purchase.

✓ This way I can shop more efficiently and avoid unnecessary purchases.

purchase是可数名词，表示购买的物品，前面应使用复数形式。

× Oh definitely, I said beginning of my work day.

✓ Oh definitely, I make a list at the beginning of my work day.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且表达不完整，应补充完整句子。

× Daddy is make a lease for my work.

✓ I make a list for my work.

这里的Daddy显然是错误的代词，应使用第一人称I，且lease应为list。

× For example, when you are busy make a list can clearly help you to know.

✓ For example, when you are busy, making a list can clearly help you know.

缺少逗号分隔状语从句，且动词形式错误，应使用动名词making。

× The whole day what's need to do and this way also?

✓ You can know what needs to be done the whole day, and this way is helpful too.

句子结构不完整，代词使用错误，需调整为完整句子。

× In my opinion somebody don't like making list because they have eligible list India brand also.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have their own methods or brands.

somebody应改为some people，且句子中有拼写和表达错误，需调整。

× Making a list need is draught underwriting down, so maybe they seeing is so take up to date on.

✓ Making a list needs writing things down, so maybe they think it's too time-consuming.

句子表达混乱，need应为needs，且后半句需改为正确表达。

× I prefer to make a legs on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

legs是错误单词，应为list。

× It's can more convenience to help you remember it.

✓ It can be more convenient to help you remember it.

convenience是名词，需用形容词convenient，且句子结构需调整。

× For examples, when you're writing down your legs on your phone, you can set a time to remind you, but the paper not can do it.

✓ For example, when you're writing down your list on your phone, you can set a reminder, but paper cannot do that.

examples应为example，legs应为list，句子结构需调整。

× Also, paper will be lost when you're not take carefully.

✓ Also, paper can be lost if you are not careful.

take carefully用法错误，应使用形容词careful修饰主语。