List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够清晰，表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议先明确回答问题，然后用连贯的句子说明做清单如何提高效率。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized and complete my tasks more efficiently.

提案: 回答内容不清楚，表达混乱，语法错误多。建议用简单明了的句子说明原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated. Also, if they don't complete their goals, they may feel disappointed.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明手机做清单的优点。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. I can easily check and update my list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, of course I will make a list for when I am shocked because a lips or list. Dead. Let me clearly. Notes. What I will bite.

✓ Yes, of course I will make a list for when I am shocked because of a lapse or list. Let me clarify. Notes. What I will buy.

句子中存在拼写错误和表达不清的问题，'lips' 应为 'lapse'，'bite' 应为 'buy'。此外，句子结构混乱，建议简化表达以提高清晰度。

× Yes, because it make a list that make me worked more efficiencies.

✓ Yes, because making a list helps me work more efficiently.

动词形式错误，'make' 应改为动名词 'making'，'worked' 应为动词原形 'work'，'efficiencies' 应为副词 'efficiently'。

× Because when I start date I make a list 2 to list.

✓ Because when I start the day, I make a to-do list.

表达不清，'start date' 应为 'start the day'，'2 to list' 应为 'to-do list'。建议使用正确短语以表达清楚。

× What will I do today the days my target so I will.

✓ I set my targets for the day, so I will follow them.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语，建议重组句子以表达完整意思。

× Because some people faint.

✓ Because some people find it difficult.

'faint' 用词错误，应为 'find'，表达“发现”或“觉得”的意思。

× Making a lace is very complex an maybe some targets do not.

✓ Making a list is very complex and maybe some targets are not achieved.

拼写错误，'lace' 应为 'list'，句子不完整，缺少谓语，建议补充完整。

× Achieve that let the people things filled more depressed when the target is doesn't achieve.

✓ Not achieving them makes people feel more depressed when the targets are not met.

句子结构错误，时态和语法混乱，建议使用正确的时态和结构表达。

× Yes, I will prefer to make the list on my phone because the form is more convenient.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make the list on my phone because the form is more convenient.

'will prefer' 用法错误，'prefer' 是一般现在时态，表示习惯或偏好，不用将来时。

× True. See what our list in Wallace.

✓ I can see my list in the app.

句子不完整且用词错误，'True' 和 'Wallace' 不合适，建议使用正确的代词和名词表达。

× And I can see it at any times in my phone.

✓ And I can see it at any time on my phone.

'any times' 应为 'any time'，'in my phone' 应为 'on my phone'，介词使用错误。