List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. For example, instead of saying 'prepare my my ideas', say 'organize my thoughts'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list to organize my thoughts and know exactly what I need from the shops, so I don't buy unnecessary items.

提案: Focus on clarity and coherence. Avoid unclear phrases like 'processor process can't estimation'. Use linking words to connect ideas and check grammar to make your answer more understandable.

例: Yes, of course I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my ideas and ensures I complete tasks on time.

提案: Improve fluency by removing hesitations and unclear words. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, say 'some people prefer not to make lists because they can organize their thoughts mentally.'

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to organize their thoughts in their minds and feel no need for written reminders.

提案: Make your answer more natural by combining sentences and correcting grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

例: Unfortunately, I still prefer the old-school approach and use paper because it helps me write down my ideas easily and clearly.

× To prepare my my ideas and to know what I need exactly from the shops so I wouldn't buy anything that I don't need.

✓ To prepare my ideas and to know exactly what I need from the shops so I wouldn't buy anything that I don't need.

The phrase 'my my ideas' contains a repeated word 'my'. This is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'my' to maintain proper singular possessive adjective usage.

× Yes, I of course I make a list.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list.

The sentence contains redundant subject 'I' twice, which causes confusion and incorrect sentence structure. Removing the extra 'I' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× Because it helped me to organize my ideas and to prevent any kind of processor process can't estimation and.

✓ Because it helps me to organize my ideas and to prevent any kind of process estimation errors.

The original sentence uses past tense 'helped' inconsistently with the present context. Also, the phrase 'processor process can't estimation and' is unclear and likely incorrect. Changing 'helped' to 'helps' aligns with present tense usage, and rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× Always done your work in the time.

✓ I always get my work done on time.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb agreement, making it incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I' as subject and restructuring the sentence provides clarity and correct grammar.

× I think that some people are they?

✓ I think that some people are like that.

The phrase 'some people are they?' is incorrect pronoun usage and sentence structure. Replacing it with 'some people are like that' corrects the pronoun and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Don't want any kind of distribution.

✓ Don't want any kind of distraction.

The word 'distribution' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'distraction'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a preposition error, but since 'distribution' is a wrong word choice, correcting it improves the sentence.

× And they have the ability. To organize their ideas and thoughts on their mind so there is a no need for any kind of lead.

✓ And they have the ability to organize their ideas and thoughts in their mind, so there is no need for any kind of list.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains awkward phrasing such as 'on their mind' and 'any kind of lead'. Correcting the sentence structure and word choice ('list' instead of 'lead') improves clarity and grammar.

× I still use the old school approach, so I use the paper.

✓ I still use the old school approach, so I use paper.

The phrase 'the paper' is incorrect here because 'paper' is an uncountable noun when referring to the material in general. Removing 'the' corrects the article usage.

× It help me to write down all my ideas easily and clearly.

✓ It helps me to write down all my ideas easily and clearly.

The verb 'help' does not agree with the singular subject 'It'. Adding 's' to form 'helps' corrects the third person singular verb agreement.