List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure clarity.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list organized by sections like vegetables, food, and bread. This helps me shop efficiently by knowing where to go first.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid incomplete sentences. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words.

例: I am still a student, so I don't have a job yet. However, if I do, I will definitely make lists because I am organized and want to avoid missing deadlines or submitting work late.

提案: Improve fluency by completing sentences and using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and be more specific in your explanation.

例: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they believe it slows them down. However, I think making lists actually saves time by helping organize tasks efficiently.

提案: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid fragmented sentences.

例: It depends on the situation. When I shop outside, I prefer to use my phone for the list because it's convenient. But for studying at home, I like to write my list on paper.

× I usually love to write down everything I want to buy.

✓ I usually like to write down everything I want to buy.

The verb 'love' is not typically used with 'usually' to express habitual actions; 'like' is more appropriate here to indicate a regular preference.

× Before going to the place, for example, if I will go to the market, I write in the vegetable section, the food section.

✓ Before going to the place, for example, if I go to the market, I write in the vegetable section, the food section.

In conditional sentences referring to the future, the present simple tense is used after 'if' instead of 'will'.

× And the bread section. To know where to go first.

✓ And the bread section to know where to go first.

The sentence is fragmented; combining the two parts into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't have a work, but if I will have a work, yes I will make the last because I am an organized person.

✓ I don't have work, but if I have work, yes I will make the list because I am an organized person.

'Work' is an uncountable noun here, so 'a work' is incorrect. Also, 'last' should be 'list' to match the context.

× if I will have a work, yes I will make the last because I am an organized person.

✓ if I have work, yes I will make the list because I am an organized person.

In conditional sentences, the present simple tense is used after 'if' instead of 'will' to talk about future possibilities.

× And I don't want to be. Delete and submitting the works and not meeting the deadlines.

✓ And I don't want to delete and submit the work late and miss the deadlines.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring it into a complete sentence with correct verb forms clarifies the meaning.

× because writing a last will save time and generally.

✓ because writing a list will save time generally.

'Last' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. Also, 'generally' should be placed at the end for better sentence flow.

× if I will go. Outside my home and do the last, I prefer it to be in my phone so I can see it easily.

✓ if I go outside my home and make the list, I prefer it to be on my phone so I can see it easily.

In conditional sentences, use present simple after 'if' instead of 'will'. Also, 'do the last' is incorrect; it should be 'make the list'. 'On my phone' is the correct preposition.

× However, if I will do a list for studying inside the home, I prefer to write it down on paper.

✓ However, if I make a list for studying inside the home, I prefer to write it down on paper.

Use present simple tense after 'if' instead of 'will' in conditional sentences. Also, 'do a list' should be 'make a list'.