List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence redundant. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar e rakhte ebong proyojon chara bar bar kotha na bolte. Apnar uttor ke aro natural korte, prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor kichu specific karon ba udaharan din. Apni chesta korun linking words babohar korte jate uttor ta logical hoy.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, last week I bought everything on my list and didn't forget anything important.

提案: Apnar uttor e onek grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence clear noy. Apni chesta korun prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor specific supporting details din. Linking words babohar korun jate uttor ta logical hoy. Apnar uttor ke aro shothik ebong sohoje bujha jay emon korte hobe.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks. For instance, by listing tasks, I can complete them step by step more easily.

提案: Apnar uttor e onek grammar ebong sentence structure er problem ache, jar karone uttor ta bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun prothome clear topic sentence din, tarpor specific karon gulo sohoje bujha jay emon vabe bolun. Linking words babohar korun jate uttor ta logical hoy. Apnar uttor ke aro natural ebong shothik korte hobe.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and limits their creativity. They prefer to be spontaneous and keep their plans flexible.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache ebong kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korun prothome direct uttor din, tarpor specific karon sohoje bujha jay emon vabe bolun. Linking words babohar korun jate uttor ta logical hoy. Apnar uttor ke aro natural ebong shothik korte hobe.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I don't have to worry about losing paper lists, and it's more convenient.

× If I don't make a list I might skip up important. Thing to buy.

✓ If I don't make a list I might skip important things to buy.

The word 'Thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to more than one item.

× That's why I make too.

✓ That's why I make one too.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'one' clarifies that the speaker also makes a list. 'Too' means 'also' but needs a clear object.

× I make list when I shop.

✓ I make a list when I shop.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it.

× Some planets work very good because some if I do list for my work I I can do it easily an part by part an it will help me.

✓ Some plans work very well because if I make a list for my work, I can do it easily part by part and it will help me.

'Planets' is incorrect; the intended word is 'plans' (plural). 'Good' should be 'well' as it modifies the verb 'work'. 'Do list' should be 'make a list'. Also, 'an part by part' should be 'part by part'.

× Some people dislike making list because they find the process time-consuming and restric.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming and restrictive.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. 'Restric' is incomplete and should be 'restrictive'.

× Some people dislike making list because they find the process time-consuming and restric.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming and restrictive.

'Restric' is not a correct word; the correct adjective is 'restrictive' to describe the process.

× It if the might field at least to my limited their creativity or spontaneous.

✓ It might limit their creativity or spontaneity.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and words. 'It might limit their creativity or spontaneity' is a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Spontaneity, preferring to keep their plan fixable or flexible rather than. Concert.

✓ They prefer to keep their plans flexible rather than fixed.

'Fixable' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'fixed'. Also, 'plan' should be plural 'plans' to match 'their'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I prefer making list on my phone because I have I have fun with my I have phone with myself every time.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because I have my phone with me all the time.

'List' should be plural 'lists' as it refers to the general activity. 'I have fun with my I have phone with myself' is incorrect and replaced with 'I have my phone with me' for clarity and correctness.

× I have fun with my I have phone with myself every time.

✓ I have my phone with me all the time.

'Myself' is incorrectly used here; the correct pronoun is 'me' to indicate possession or accompaniment.