List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，存在重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意时态一致。可以直接说出是否做购物清单，并简要说明原因。

例: I don't usually make a written list when I shop, but I keep a mental list of items I need. This helps me focus on buying only what is necessary.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，清晰表达做工作清单的习惯和效果。

例: Yes, I like making a detailed to-do list every morning. It helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively throughout the day.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点，避免模糊和重复。可以列举具体原因并用连接词衔接。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel disappointed if they can't complete all tasks. Also, detailed lists can seem complicated and overwhelming.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不流畅的问题，建议简化句子，清楚说明偏好及原因，避免口语填充词。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to update them instantly. I can also track what I've completed and plan my next tasks efficiently.

× I will not make a list, but I would have something, uh, I would have a list in my brain like what I want to buy an what I don't want to buy.

✓ I will not make a list, but I would have something, uh, I would have a list in my brain like what I want to buy and what I don't want to buy.

原句中“an”应为“and”，这是拼写错误，不属于语法问题，但需要纠正以保证句子通顺。

× And, but when I walked in the shop, I, I would all always buy something that I'm, I know need immediately.

✓ And, but when I walk into the shop, I would always buy something that I know I need immediately.

原句中“walked”使用了过去式，但句子描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“walk”。另外，“all always”重复，应改为“always”。“I'm, I know need”结构混乱，应改为“I know I need”。

× Yeah, I just love making a list to when I'm working on, I will make a list in the morning like what I would do in a day and I will just make a very specific list alike on.

✓ Yeah, I just love making a list when I'm working; I will make a list in the morning of what I will do in a day and I will just make a very specific list like that.

原句中“to when I'm working on”结构不正确，应改为“when I'm working”。“alike on”用法错误，应改为“like that”。

× Including time an what I will do? Like this?

✓ Including the time and what I will do, like this.

原句中“an”应为“and”，且句子结构不完整，应补充“the”使其更自然。

× I think the first reason is that they also they always you know, they can finish the list and they will feel a fuel enough faillon and it's really bad feeling, right.

✓ I think the first reason is that they always, you know, can finish the list and they will feel fulfilled enough, and it's a really bad feeling, right?

原句中“they also they always”重复，应删去“also”。“a fuel enough faillon”是错误表达，应改为“fulfilled enough”。

× And the secondly that it is really complicated and because it's a really specific list, right.

✓ And secondly, it is really complicated because it's a really specific list, right?

原句中“the secondly that”用法错误，应改为“secondly”。“and because”连接不当，应去掉“and”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because when you know when it comes to a sudden's.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because, you know, when it comes to a sudden situation,

原句中“when it comes to a sudden's”不完整且用法错误，应补充“situation”使其完整。

× Things like I can change it immediately and I can, you know? I can just make a note like what I have done and what I have to do in the next time.

✓ Things like I can change it immediately and I can, you know, just make a note of what I have done and what I have to do next time.

原句中“like what I have done”应改为“of what I have done”，介词使用错误。“in the next time”应改为“next time”。