List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích thêm bằng các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I only buy a few items that I can easily remember. However, if I need to buy many things, I sometimes write a list to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Bạn trả lời có nội dung phù hợp nhưng câu trả lời còn dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before my exams to organize what I need to study each day. It helps me remember important tasks and check off items when I complete them.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể.

例: Some people, including me, don't like making lists because we find it easy to remember tasks without writing them down. However, for important events, making a list can be helpful to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính hiệu quả của câu trả lời. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists can be easily lost or damaged. Also, digital lists are easier to edit and check off.

× the things that I want to buy is in

✓ the things that I want to buy are in

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× For that I mean that is not a lot of that I can. Remember in my mind.

✓ What I mean is that there are not a lot of things I can remember in my mind.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to form a complete and coherent sentence.

× I usually make a list for my sturdy before my exam an I will list something that I have to do in a day in have to learn in a day

✓ I usually make a list for my study before my exam and I will list things that I have to do in a day and have to learn in a day

'Sturdy' is a typo for 'study'. Also, 'something' should be plural 'things' to match the context of multiple tasks.

× and then I will check a list when I forgot something.

✓ and then I will check the list when I forget something.

The verb tense should be present 'forget' to match 'will check', and 'a list' should be 'the list' for specificity.

× I sling people included me don't like making list because is.

✓ Some people, including me, don't like making lists because it is.

'Sling' is a typo for 'some'. 'List' should be plural 'lists'. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× Everything that we want to do is easy to remember an it doesn't need to make a list,

✓ Everything that we want to do is easy to remember and we don't need to make a list,

The sentence lacks a subject for 'doesn't need'; it should be 'we don't need'. Also, 'an' is a typo for 'and'.

× but sometimes at the important events an. 2IN.

✓ but sometimes at important events, we do make a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; it needs to be completed to convey the intended meaning.

× I prefer to Michael is on my phone because I mean that the the paper is easy to forgetting.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think that paper is easy to forget.

'Michael is' is a mishearing or typo for 'make lists'. 'Forgetting' should be 'forget' as a verb after 'easy to'.

× Anne. When you. A tear is it? Maybe? Not completed to see what you write on the paper.

✓ And when you tear it, maybe it is not complete to see what you wrote on the paper.

The original is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be restructured into a coherent sentence.