List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'shopping with purpose' and 'get things on my priority.' Also, correct grammar errors such as 'make some list' should be 'make a list' and 'avoid get unnecessary stuff' should be 'avoid getting unnecessary items.' Try to use linking words to improve flow.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me prioritize what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'making the list' instead of 'making a list' and the incomplete sentence 'so I try to always have. It with me.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how it helps you.

例: Absolutely, I make a list for my work every day because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete, so I always keep it with me.

提案: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and explain your idea more clearly. For example, explain that some people prefer not to make lists because they have good memory. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: In my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they have strong memories and can easily remember their tasks without writing them down.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Instead of 'I managed to list on my phone,' say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone.' Also, explain why it is convenient with linking words.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily read and update my items whenever I need to.

× I am a huge fan of shopping with purpose so I tried to make some list when I go shopping and get things on my priority and avoid get unnecessary stuff.

✓ I am a huge fan of shopping with purpose, so I try to make some lists when I go shopping, get things on my priority, and avoid getting unnecessary stuff.

The verb 'tried' should be 'try' to match the present tense context. Also, 'avoid get' is incorrect; after 'avoid' the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'avoid getting' is correct. Additionally, 'some list' should be plural 'some lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is appropriate here.

× making the list helps me remember the task I should do on that specific day, so I try to always have. It with me.

✓ Making the list helps me remember the tasks I should do on that specific day, so I try to always have it with me.

The phrase 'the task' should be plural 'the tasks' because multiple tasks are implied. Also, the sentence had a misplaced period after 'have' which breaks the sentence; it should be 'have it with me' as one continuous phrase.

× Lists. In my prespective, they have a strong mind so they are easily remembered. Tasks on their mind.

✓ Lists, in my perspective, are for people who have a strong mind, so they easily remember tasks in their mind.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'prespective' is a misspelling of 'perspective'.

× I managed to list on my phone because it is more convenient for me and I can read items more easily.

✓ I manage to list on my phone because it is more convenient for me and I can read items more easily.

The verb 'managed' suggests past tense, but the context implies a habitual action, so 'manage' in present tense is better. Also, 'to list on my phone' is acceptable, but 'to make a list on my phone' would be clearer. However, since only grammar problems from the list are to be corrected, 'manage' tense is corrected here.