List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai như "an" thay vì "and"; câu "For summer" không rõ nghĩa và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh câu ngắt quãng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, of course. I see it as a way to help me stick to my budget and avoid buying unnecessary things. For example, I usually make a quick list before going to the supermarket to ensure I know exactly what I need to buy.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, ví dụ "an" thay vì "and", "My shoulder" không đúng ngữ cảnh, nên dùng "shoulder" hoặc "I can". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngắt quãng và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I do. Because I have many tasks to complete each day, it's hard to remember them all. Therefore, I write them down so that I can keep track and stay organized.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu phức tạp không chính xác, ví dụ "an is a waste" sai ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they see it as a waste of time. Also, some prefer to shop quickly or enjoy shopping spontaneously without planning.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ sai như "font" thay vì "phone", "an on" không rõ nghĩa, "Caitians" không đúng từ. Bạn nên luyện phát âm và dùng từ chính xác, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngắt quãng.

例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I can carry the list everywhere and it reminds me to complete my tasks on time.

× I see it as a way to help me to stick to my budget an avoid buying unnecessary things.

✓ I see it as a way to help me stick to my budget and avoid buying unnecessary things.

The preposition 'to' after 'help me' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'help' is followed directly by the base verb without 'to'. Also, 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'.

× For summer.

✓ For example, in summer,

'For summer.' is a sentence fragment and lacks a verb or clear meaning. It should be expanded to a full phrase or sentence to clarify the meaning.

× I usually make the click list before we get to the supermarket to make sure that I know exactly what I need to buy.

✓ I usually make the shopping list before we get to the supermarket to make sure that I know exactly what I need to buy.

The word 'click' is incorrect here; likely a mishearing or typo for 'shopping'. The adjective should correctly describe the type of list.

× because I have a bunch of things that have to do during the days, so it's really difficult for me to remember all of them.

✓ because I have a bunch of things that I have to do during the day, so it's really difficult for me to remember all of them.

The phrase 'have to do during the days' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do during the day' to indicate daily tasks.

× So I need to write them down an. My shoulder, I can track on that, stay on track the things that I need to do.

✓ So I need to write them down and, on my shoulder, I can track that and stay on track with the things that I need to do.

'My shoulder' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on my shoulder' meaning to carry responsibility. Also, 'an.' is a typo for 'and'. The phrase 'track on that' is awkward; 'track that' is better.

× Well, I think that because they may see it as an is a waste of time and unnecessary activity like especially for we are the people who want to shop quickly or also for people who enjoy spontaneous feelings of shopping without making plans.

✓ Well, I think it's because they may see it as a waste of time and an unnecessary activity, especially for people who want to shop quickly or for those who enjoy the spontaneous feeling of shopping without making plans.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'an is a waste' is incorrect; it should be 'a waste'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Well, I think my phone definitely for sure because it's really convenient.

✓ Well, I definitely think my phone is better because it's really convenient.

The phrase 'my phone definitely for sure' is awkward and incomplete. It needs a verb and clearer structure.

× I can carry like the list with my font to everywhere every time that I need an on.

✓ I can carry the list on my phone everywhere, every time I need it.

'my font' is a typo for 'my phone'. The phrase 'carry like the list with my font to everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'carry the list on my phone everywhere'. Also, 'an on' is a typo for 'it on' or 'it'.

× So it has nothing Caitians, which reminds me to do the job to do the tax on time.

✓ So it has notifications, which remind me to do the tasks on time.

'nothing Caitians' is a mishearing or typo for 'notifications'. 'to do the job to do the tax' is incorrect; it should be 'do the tasks'. The sentence needs correction for clarity and grammar.