List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に正しくなく、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、具体的な例を加える練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, last week I wrote down vegetables and milk to avoid forgetting them.

提案: 文が断片的で意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や効果を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because I tend to forget tasks. It helps me stay organized and complete my work on time.

提案: 理由の説明が不十分で、文法的にも誤りがあります。理由を明確に述べ、具体的な例を加えて説明する練習をしましょう。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed when they cannot complete all the tasks. For example, if they leave many items unfinished, they might feel disappointed.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りがあります。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、具体的な例を加える練習をしましょう。

例: I prefer to make my task list on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere.

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✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because I often buy something important or items I need nearby.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I. Often make a list for my work. R's To Do List because I often forgot forgetting. About my. I should.

✓ Yes, I often make a To Do List for my work because I often forget about my tasks.

The original sentence contains incorrect verb forms and fragmented phrases. 'Forgot forgetting' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'forget'. Also, sentence fragments need to be combined into a complete sentence.

× Is some people can't complete our To Do List. It is, source adds. Sorry. They don't like that To Do List.

✓ Some people can't complete their To Do List. It is a source of stress, so they don't like making lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting pronouns and combining fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I play for to make God. Task list. On my phone because I. Usually. Half have to have my phone with me so I can watch. Every time.

✓ I prefer to make a task list on my phone because I usually have to have my phone with me so I can check it anytime.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. Correcting the verb usage and combining fragments into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammar.