List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use clear linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, correct small grammar mistakes and avoid filler words to sound more natural.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list. First, I write down the necessities, then I arrange the items from most to least important. This way, I ensure I buy the essential things first.

提案: Improve sentence structure and clarity by avoiding repetition and using linking words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid fragmented sentences.

例: Yes, making a list for work is very effective. I list urgent tasks first, then the less urgent ones, so I can complete important jobs quickly before moving on to others.

提案: Work on sentence fluency and grammar. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain reasons clearly.

例: Some people dislike making lists because it confuses them. They prefer to work freely, which helps them complete tasks in their own way.

提案: Try to avoid repetition and use more precise language. Connect your ideas smoothly with linking words to improve coherence.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Since I always have my phone with me, I can easily check my list anytime I need.

× And. Like all of the things I need and I put them like too important.

✓ Like all of the things I need, I put them from most important to least important.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'And. Like' as a conjunction and has unclear structure. Replacing it with a clearer phrase improves sentence flow and clarity.

× I put them like too important. To least important an I tried to get like the important stuff first.

✓ I put them from most important to least important and I try to get the important stuff first.

The phrase 'like too important' is incorrect; 'from most important to least important' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate order. Also, 'an' should be 'and', and 'tried' should be 'try' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Does it work?

✓ Does it work?

No correction needed; the question is grammatically correct.

× I make a list of all the things I need to get done as fast as possible and after that.

✓ I make a list of all the things I need to get done as fast as possible, and after that,

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a comma and continuing the sentence would improve clarity, but no tense error is present.

× I put the thing I need to do so I can work on it after I finish all of the things that I need to get done. Fast.

✓ I put the things I need to do so I can work on them after I finish all of the things that I need to get done quickly.

The original sentence has a fragment 'Fast.' which should be connected to the previous sentence. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match context, and 'them' replaces 'it' for plural agreement.

× I think sometimes people don't like like making this 'cause it's confuses them.

✓ I think sometimes people don't like making this because it confuses them.

The phrase 'like like' is redundant and 'it's confuses' is incorrect; 'it confuses' is correct. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is preferred in formal speech.

× They. Some people like to work freely, and that's how they. Get the job done and. Like.

✓ Some people like to work freely, and that's how they get the job done.

The original contains sentence fragments and unnecessary 'like' at the end. Combining fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity.

× I prefer. Doing it on my phone 'cause it's easier and I have my phone with me like.

✓ I prefer doing it on my phone because it's easier and I have my phone with me all the time.

The phrase 'with me like' is informal and unclear; replacing it with 'all the time' clarifies the meaning.

× I have my phone with me 24/7. All the time so it's easier for me to access the list and see what I need to get done.

✓ I have my phone with me 24/7, so it's easier for me to access the list and see what I need to get done.

The sentence is split unnecessarily; combining into one sentence with a comma improves flow and clarity.