List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to add more specific details about how making a list helps you, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need; moreover, it saves time by preventing unnecessary purchases.

提案: Improve your answer by correcting grammar ('works' should be 'work') and adding linking words and specific examples to explain how the list helps you.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized; for instance, I can prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important deadlines.

提案: Be careful with word choice ('tide' should be 'tied') and try to use linking words to connect your ideas more naturally.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility; therefore, they enjoy doing tasks spontaneously, which makes them feel more free.

提案: Avoid sentence fragments and improve coherence by using linking words; also, correct 'by hands' to 'by hand'.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me stay focused and organized; additionally, writing things down by hand feels more personal and makes it easier to remember tasks.

× I make a list for my works.

✓ I make a list for my work.

The word 'work' in this context is an uncountable noun referring to tasks or job duties, so it should not be pluralized as 'works'. Using 'works' implies multiple separate pieces or creations, which is incorrect here.

× Some people like to be flexible and don't want to be tide down by a list.

✓ Some people like to be flexible and don't want to be tied down by a list.

The phrase 'tide down' is incorrect; the correct past participle form of the verb 'tie' is 'tied'. 'Tied down' means restricted or constrained, which fits the intended meaning.

× Writing things down by hands feels more personal.

✓ Writing things down by hand feels more personal.

The phrase 'by hands' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'by hand' when referring to doing something manually. 'By hand' is an idiomatic expression meaning using one's hand(s) rather than a machine.

× And makes it easier to remember tasks.

✓ And it makes it easier to remember tasks.

The sentence fragment 'And makes it easier to remember tasks.' lacks a subject. Adding 'it' as the subject corrects the sentence structure.