List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

提案: Your response is confusing and incomplete. Please answer directly with a clear topic sentence and explain how making a list helps you at work. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks. It works well because it helps me stay organized and not forget important duties.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to clearly explain reasons why some people dislike making lists, using specific examples and linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally. For example, they may feel that lists restrict their flexibility.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Please give a direct answer and explain your preference with specific reasons, using correct grammar and linking words.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand feels more personal and helps me remember better. It also gives me a nostalgic feeling.

× Yes, I make a list when I saw her because the two remember it correctly when it is a.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember correctly what to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'saw' (past tense of 'see') which does not fit the context. The sentence is about making a list when shopping, so 'saw her' is incorrect. The correction uses present tense 'shop' to match the question and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes Sir, it make I make a list for my work.

✓ Yes Sir, I make a list for my work.

The phrase 'it make I make' is incorrect. The subject 'I' requires the verb 'make' without 'it'. The corrected sentence removes 'it' and uses proper subject-verb agreement.

× It works because I forgot my name. Give my.

✓ It works because I don't forget anything.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'I forgot my name. Give my.' does not make sense in context. The correction provides a clear reason why making a list works, using present tense and proper sentence structure.

× Some people like making Lister because it is to remember the topic or things.

✓ Some people like making lists because it helps them remember topics or things.

'Lister' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'it is to remember' is incorrect usage. The correction uses 'helps them remember' to properly express the idea and correct pronoun usage.

× What do you want to bring it and organize it very carefully.

✓ They want to bring items and organize them very carefully.

The original sentence is a question but does not fit context and is grammatically incorrect. The correction changes it to a statement that fits the context and corrects pronoun use and sentence structure.

× For example, when we have a long list of things we need to water, it may be forgotten, so it will still.

✓ For example, when we have a long list of things we need to buy, some items may be forgotten, so making a list helps prevent that.

The original sentence is confusing and incomplete. 'Things we need to water' is likely a mistake for 'things we need to buy'. The correction clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence logically.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper because it gives because it gives additional feeling which is to make us happy, nostalgic and another 50 hour.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper because it gives an additional feeling that makes us happy and nostalgic.

The sentence repeats 'because it gives' unnecessarily and ends with 'another 50 hour' which is unclear. The correction removes redundancy and unclear phrase, improving clarity and grammar.