List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it could be more concise and structured. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your behavior with supporting details.

例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list for essential items, but I often buy other things on impulse because I enjoy spontaneous shopping.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks fluency and has some grammatical errors. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to connect ideas. Also, be more specific about why you can't complete all tasks and how you manage your study list.

例: As a student, I don't make lists for work, but I do create study lists to organize my day. Although I plan all my tasks, I usually complete only about 40 to 50 percent because some tasks take longer than expected.

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific reasons or examples. This will make your response more detailed and engaging.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process tedious and believe it doesn't help them stay organized or focused, especially if they prefer a more flexible approach to managing tasks.

提案: Your answer is natural and relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your points about phone features.

例: Although many people prefer paper lists, I prefer using my phone because I always have it with me. Features like widgets on the home screen serve as constant reminders to complete my tasks.

× I am a school students so I don't make a list for work but I do make it for my studies.

✓ I am a school student so I don't make a list for work but I do make it for my studies.

The word 'students' is plural, but the subject 'I' is singular. The correct singular form is 'student' to match the singular subject.

× I tried to plan out my whole day by listing out the tasks that I have to complete in the day.

✓ I try to plan out my whole day by listing the tasks that I have to complete during the day.

The sentence mixes past tense 'tried' with present tense 'have to complete'. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'try' is appropriate. Also, 'listing out' is redundant; 'listing' suffices.

× But unfortunately not able to complete.

✓ But unfortunately, I am not able to complete them.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I am' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× The whole task completely, but 40 to 50% of the tasks I'm able to complete.

✓ The whole task completely, but I am able to complete 40 to 50% of the tasks.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering and adding 'I am able to complete' clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Some people don't like making lists, probably because they feel that it is tedious and something that's not going to help them stay more organized or focused.

✓ Some people don't like making lists, probably because they feel that it is tedious and won't help them stay organized or focused.

The phrase 'not going to help them stay more organized' is awkward. Using 'won't help them stay organized' is more natural and concise.

× I know there are a lot of people that prefer making a list on paper, but I personally prefer making it on my phone because I always have my phone or at least one of my gadgets with me, so it's like a constant reminder of doing the task that I need to complete.

✓ I know there are a lot of people who prefer making a list on paper, but I personally prefer making it on my phone because I always have my phone or at least one of my gadgets with me, so it's like a constant reminder to do the tasks that I need to complete.

The phrase 'reminder of doing the task' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'reminder to do the tasks' to indicate purpose.

× Like even with the new features now that I can put widgets on my front screen. That show me that OK.

✓ Even with the new features now, I can put widgets on my front screen that show me reminders.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.