List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and clearer sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'When I show up by this', you can say 'By making a list, I can easily remember what I need to buy for my home or other things.'

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy for my home and other necessities.

提案: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and better grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'I get remember all the things', say 'I can remember all the tasks I need to complete on time.' Also, try to keep your answer concise and avoid unnecessary words.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete. Moreover, if a task has a deadline, I can finish it on time by following my list.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to form complete sentences and express your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts. For example, you can say, 'In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember everything without writing it down.'

例: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they have a strong memory and prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more natural expressions and correct grammar. Avoid exaggerations like 'millions of years' and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because they are safely saved and I can access them anytime and anywhere.'

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because they are securely saved and I can easily access them whenever I need, no matter where I am.

× When I show up by this I can remember what I have to buy for my home or anything else.

✓ When I show up with this, I can remember what I have to buy for my home or anything else.

The phrase 'show up by this' is incorrect. The correct preposition here is 'with' to indicate carrying or having the list. So, 'show up with this' is the proper usage.

× And it also works becauses I get remember all the things what I have to do on time and if it is a time based task then I will do it definitely on time all the things.

✓ And it also works because I remember all the things I have to do on time, and if it is a time-based task, then I will definitely do all the things on time.

The phrase 'I get remember' is incorrect; 'get' is unnecessary here. Also, 'becauses' is a spelling error for 'because'. The phrase 'what I have to do' should be 'I have to do'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× From my point of view, I think that the people who don't make any list or the memory level of them. Is so good in remembering everything.

✓ From my point of view, I think that the people who don't make any list have a good memory and can remember everything well.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Or the memory level of them' is incorrect and incomplete. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone becauses it can be saved in my phone for millions of years till I don't delete that and it can be safely saved and.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can be saved on my phone for millions of years until I delete it, and it can be safely stored.

The preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' when referring to data storage. 'Becauses' is a spelling error for 'because'. 'Till I don't delete that' is incorrect; it should be 'until I delete it'. The sentence is also completed for clarity.

× I can see the list where wherever I want to see.

✓ I can see the list wherever I want to see it.

The phrase 'where wherever' is redundant; 'wherever' alone is sufficient. Also, the verb 'see' requires an object, so 'it' is added at the end for correct pronoun usage.