List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, say 'I usually make a shopping list because it saves me time and helps me stay organized.'

例: I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it saves me time and helps me remember everything I need.

提案: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I usually make a list before starting work because it helps me manage my time and organize my thoughts, which improves my productivity.'

例: I usually make a list before starting work because it helps me manage my time and organize my thoughts, which improves my productivity.

提案: Focus on clarity and correct word choice. Use linking words to contrast ideas properly. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time. However, lists can help organize tasks and save time overall.'

例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time. However, lists can help organize tasks and save time overall. For example, when I make a list, I feel more focused and less stressed.

提案: Work on pronunciation and word choice to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to compare options. For example, say 'It depends on the situation. When I have enough time, I prefer writing a list on paper because it feels more organized and personal. However, if I'm in a hurry, I find it easier to make a list on my phone.'

例: It depends on the situation. When I have enough time, I prefer writing a list on paper because it feels more organized and personal. However, if I'm in a hurry, I find it easier to make a list on my phone.

× Yeah, I usually make a list with arm going shopping because it saved my time and work, not organized item.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it saves my time and effort, and helps me organize items.

The original sentence misuses 'arm going shopping' which is unclear and incorrect. Also, 'saved' should be 'saves' to match the present tense 'usually make'. 'Work' is better replaced with 'effort' for clarity, and 'not organized item' is unclear and corrected to 'helps me organize items'. The corrections ensure proper verb tense and clearer meaning.

× Yeah, I usually make a list before I start working because it's helped me to set my time and organize my mind, and that's helped me a lot.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a list before I start working because it helps me manage my time and organize my mind, and that's helped me a lot.

The phrase 'it's helped me' incorrectly uses present perfect tense where simple present 'helps me' is more appropriate to describe a habitual action. 'Set my time' is better expressed as 'manage my time' for natural English usage.

× I think some people don't like making less because they believed it was their time.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it wastes their time.

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' to match the context. Also, 'believed' should be 'believe' to maintain present tense consistency. 'It was their time' is unclear and corrected to 'it wastes their time' for clarity.

× However, making list can actually help organize tags and save time in the long run.

✓ However, making lists can actually help organize tasks and save time in the long run.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to agree in number. 'Tags' is likely a typo or incorrect word; 'tasks' fits the context better.

× Actually it depends on the situation. When I have enough time, I bear fur to sit down and hold my pen and write a list paper because it feels more organized and personal.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation. When I have enough time, I prefer to sit down, hold my pen, and write a list on paper because it feels more organized and personal.

'I bear fur' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'I prefer'. 'Write a list paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write a list on paper'. Commas added for clarity.

× However, if I'm a hurry, I find easier more to make arrest on my phone.

✓ However, if I'm in a hurry, I find it easier to make a list on my phone.

'If I'm a hurry' should be 'if I'm in a hurry' to use the correct preposition. 'I find easier more' is incorrect word order; correct is 'I find it easier'. 'Make arrest' is a mishearing or typo; it should be 'make a list'. These corrections fix preposition use, word order, and vocabulary.