List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Oh, no, not really 'cause I think make a list of four when I, when I shop is really difficult to end. We often make a listing in the, you know, in a big, you know, a small paper and it is really, it is really easy to be lost. So I don't make a list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
I will ask for work, I will make a list of 'cause you know, make a list of all work is really efficient and it is very clearly for me about the work test when let me give you some example. Just if I'd forget what to do the next, I just didn't need to look at the list.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Well, maybe. I think the reason is people think making a list, it's really complex and sometimes making a list will with a lot of time and sometimes is maybe it's really difficult for people to think clearly about their things to do.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Oh well, as far as question, actually I don't like to make a list, but if you ask me to make a list, I would choose to make it on my phone 'cause, you know, make a list on the paper. It is really easy to be lossed to. Custom paper was really small and it's not easy to be found.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 55.0提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词，使用更准确的表达方式。
例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it hard to finish it. Sometimes I write a list on a small piece of paper, but it's easy to lose, so I prefer to shop without a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯，缺少清晰的主题句和逻辑连接词。建议先明确回答，再用具体例子支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, if I forget what to do next, I can just check my list to remind myself.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中表达有些重复且不够简洁，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免模糊表达，增强逻辑性。
例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's complicated and time-consuming. Also, it can be hard for them to organize their tasks clearly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的词汇表达观点。
例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists are easy to lose. Also, paper is often small and hard to find when needed.
文法
× I think make a list of four when I, when I shop is really difficult to end.
✓ I think making a list of four items when I shop is really difficult to finish.
这里的'make a list of four'中，'four'应具体指代复数的物品，因此需要用复数形式'four items'，并且动词形式应为动名词'making'，表示动作的进行。
× We often make a listing in the, you know, in a big, you know, a small paper and it is really, it is really easy to be lost.
✓ We often make a list on a small piece of paper, and it is really easy to lose.
'make a listing'不符合习惯表达，应为'make a list'。'in a small paper'应改为'on a small piece of paper'，因为纸张是平面，使用介词'on'。'easy to be lost'应改为'easy to lose'，表达更自然。
× make a list on the paper. It is really easy to be lossed to.
✓ make a list on paper. It is really easy to be lost.
'on the paper'中的定冠词'the'不必要，通常说'on paper'。'lossed'是错误拼写，应为'lost'。
× Custom paper was really small and it's not easy to be found.
✓ The paper is really small and it's not easy to find.
'Custom paper'表达不清，应为'the paper'。'to be found'改为' to find'更符合语境，表示不容易找到。
× Just if I'd forget what to do the next, I just didn't need to look at the list.
✓ If I forget what to do next, I just need to look at the list.
这里时态混乱，'I'd forget'应为一般现在时'forget'，'didn't need'应为'need'，因为描述的是习惯动作。
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