List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentence structures to express your ideas naturally. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details logically.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially during busy times like Easter week. It helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and shop more efficiently.

提案: Your answer has some good points but the sentences are not very clear and contain grammatical errors. Try to use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about how making lists helps you at work.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more effectively and avoid forgetting important duties. This method definitely improves my productivity.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing. Try to express your opinion clearly and use simple sentences. Explain reasons logically and avoid unnecessary words.

例: Well, I think some people do not like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Nowadays, many people are very busy and prefer to do things quickly without writing lists.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why. Use simple and correct sentences to make your point.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to write things down. I do not like making lists on my phone as it feels less convenient for me.

× Yes, I make all Easter week 'cause it's helped me ported D remembers and to do I.

✓ Yes, I made a list all Easter week because it helped me remember what to do.

The original sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'make' and past participle 'ported' instead of past tense verbs. The correct past tense forms 'made' and 'helped' should be used to indicate completed actions in the past.

× I buying needed to know and it's helping me too time consuming and I easily easily remembered and to make a.

✓ I buy what I need to know, and it helps me save time. I can easily remember and make a list.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Correcting it into clear, complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I usually make a list about my work because it help me stay organized and repo caused.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list about my work because it helps me stay organized and focused.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'repo caused' is unclear and replaced with 'focused' for meaning.

× For example, by listing it task in our order of priority, I can manage my time more effective and avoid forgetting.

✓ For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more effectively and avoid forgetting.

The preposition 'in' is correctly used, but 'it task' is incorrect; it should be 'tasks'. Also, 'more effective' should be the adverb 'more effectively' to modify the verb 'manage'.

× I can manage my time more effective and avoid forgetting.

✓ I can manage my time more effectively and avoid forgetting.

The adjective 'effective' should be changed to the adverb 'effectively' to correctly modify the verb 'manage'.

× Important to do the overall making earliest to definitely improve.

✓ It is important to do tasks early to definitely improve overall performance.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding necessary subjects and verbs forms a complete sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× Well, according to me or some people about angles busy nowadays will cause in this modern Arab people don't oh don't making a list.

✓ Well, according to me, some people are busy nowadays, so in this modern age, people don't like making lists.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has unclear phrases. Correcting prepositions and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Becauses they below consume the timing.

✓ Because they feel it consumes too much time.

The pronoun 'they' is correct, but the phrase 'below consume the timing' is incorrect and unclear. Replacing it with 'feel it consumes too much time' clarifies the meaning.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on people because I think it is a writer down.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think it is better to write it down.

The pronoun 'people' is incorrect here; it should be 'paper'. Also, 'writer down' is incorrect and replaced with 'write it down'.

× It's easy way and oh I don't like only to make list in phone.

✓ It's an easy way, and I don't like to make lists only on my phone.

The sentence lacks articles and proper pronouns. Adding 'an' before 'easy way' and 'my' before 'phone' corrects the sentence.