List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. For example, I write down groceries and household essentials to stay within my budget.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Provide a clear topic sentence, use linking words to connect ideas, and give specific examples. Make sure your sentences are complete and meaningful.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For instance, by writing down my tasks, I can prioritize them better and ensure that nothing is overlooked.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incorrect word choices and grammar. Use simple and clear language to explain reasons, and connect your ideas logically with linking words.

例: Some people do not like making lists because they find it repetitive and time-consuming. Also, they may feel that lists limit their freedom, so they prefer to keep their plans flexible instead of fixed.

提案: Your answer has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, and organize your ideas clearly with linking words. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your preference.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or remove items anytime without worrying about losing paper. Also, apps help me organize my tasks better and set reminders.

× Yes, I make the list of when I shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop.

The phrase 'make the list of when I shop' is incorrect because 'list' is countable and should be preceded by an article 'a' when mentioned generally. Also, 'of when I shop' is unnecessary and awkward here. The correct expression is 'make a list when I shop'.

× It's helpful, remember.

✓ It's helpful, you know.

The phrase 'It's helpful, remember' is awkward and incomplete. Adding 'you know' makes it a natural conversational phrase. Alternatively, 'It's helpful, I remember' would be incorrect here. The sentence needs a proper phrase to convey the meaning.

× What I need? Dubai and keep me from spending too much money I usually right.

✓ It helps me remember what I need and keeps me from spending too much money. I usually write it down on paper before I go.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'What I need? Dubai and keep me from spending too much money I usually right.' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects verb forms and sentence structure.

× I usually right. It down on paper before I go.

✓ I usually write it down on paper before I go.

The verb 'right' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'write'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'it' to specify what is being written down.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work becaused.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused throughout the day.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs the reason for making a list.

× For instance, by writing down my teeth, I can.

✓ For instance, by writing down my tasks, I can manage them better.

The word 'teeth' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'tasks'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs a verb phrase to complete the meaning.

× The rise them better and ensure that nothing improve.

✓ Prioritize them better and ensure that nothing is missed.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'The rise them better' and 'nothing improve' are incorrect phrases. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct meaning.

× Some people dislike making list becaused they find the process this receptive and time consuming.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find the process repetitive and time-consuming.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'This receptive' is incorrect; the intended word is 'repetitive'.

× They may feel that list limit their gravity or.

✓ They may feel that lists limit their creativity or flexibility.

The sentence is incomplete and contains errors. 'List' should be plural 'lists'. 'Gravity or' is incorrect; likely intended 'creativity or flexibility'. The correction completes the sentence meaningfully.

× This point neatly prefer prepping to keep their plans flexible rather than fixed.

✓ At this point, they prefer preparing to keep their plans flexible rather than fixed.

The original sentence is awkward and contains errors like 'neatly prefer prepping'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects word choice.

× I prefer making list on my phone becaused it more convicted and assessable.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible.

'List' should be plural 'lists' as it refers to the general activity. 'Becaused' is incorrect; correct word is 'because'. 'Convicted' is incorrect; the intended word is 'convenient'. 'Assessable' is incorrect; the intended word is 'accessible'.

× For example, I can easily add more detail items anytime without wrongly about using the paper, using the paper, losing the paper, also using app help me organize my take better and Saturday. Reminders.

✓ For example, I can easily add more detailed items anytime without worrying about using paper, losing paper, and using the app helps me organize my tasks better and set reminders.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains multiple errors: 'wrongly about' should be 'worrying about'; 'detail items' should be 'detailed items'; 'take' should be 'tasks'; 'Saturday. Reminders' is incorrect and should be 'set reminders'. The correction improves clarity and grammar.