List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Sometimes I don't make a list when I shop because I like to buy things that catch my eye. However, when I need daily necessities, I usually make a list to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用正确的时态和完整句子，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list when I have a lot of homework. It helps me because I have a poor memory, so the list reminds me of the tasks I need to complete.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember everything they need. However, I prefer to make lists because I often forget things.

提案: 回答较为完整，但有些重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意语法准确。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can check my list anytime and anywhere, which helps me organize my day effectively.

× Well, it depends when sometimes I just throw around Stro around the supermarket and I don't know why to buy.

✓ Well, it depends. Sometimes I just throw stuff around the supermarket and I don't know what to buy.

这里'stro'应该是'stuff'，表示东西，且'stro'是拼写错误。'stuff'是不可数名词，表示物品。句子中缺少逗号分隔，导致句子结构混乱。建议分开句子，明确表达。

× Just buy some, catch my eyes.

✓ I just buy some things that catch my eyes.

原句缺少主语和谓语，且'catch my eyes'应作为定语从句修饰'buy some things'。需要补充完整句子结构。

× But that's time that I'll buy something needing my daily life, so I.

✓ But that's the time when I'll buy something needed for my daily life, so I do.

'something needing my daily life'表达不正确，应该是'needed for my daily life'，表示为日常生活所需的东西。句子不完整，缺少谓语。

× Oh, if I had a lot of homework to do, I will make a list.

✓ Oh, if I have a lot of homework to do, I will make a list.

条件句中，真实条件应使用一般现在时，'if I have'，而非过去时'had'。

× I think it works to me because, you know, I'm not good at in memory.

✓ I think it works for me because, you know, I'm not good at memory.

'works to me'应为'works for me'，表示对我有效。'not good at in memory'中'in'多余，应去掉。

× So when if I had a lift.

✓ So when I have a list,

'lift'应为'list'，且句子结构错误，'when if'重复，应去掉一个。

× Next, it will reminds me of what to do or what.

✓ Next, it will remind me of what to do.

'reminds'应为原形'remind'，因为助动词'will'后接动词原形。句子末尾多余' or what'，应删除。

× Maybe they have a good memory and they can, memory.

✓ Maybe they have a good memory and they can remember.

'can, memory'中'memory'用错，应为动词'remember'。

× All the items that need you.

✓ All the items that they need.

句子缺少主语，'need you'不合适，应为'they need'，表示他们需要的所有物品。

× In their mind, But I can't.

✓ In their mind, but I can't.

句首'But'不应大写，且句子不完整，建议合并前后句。

× Well, I think, maybe on my phone because, make the list on phone is so convenient for me.

✓ Well, I think maybe on my phone because making the list on the phone is so convenient for me.

'make the list'应改为动名词'making the list'，'on phone'应为'on the phone'。

× I can do it every time and everywhere, every time, everyday.

✓ I can do it anytime and anywhere, every day.

'every time and everywhere'表达不自然，建议用'anytime and anywhere'。'everyday'是形容词，应分开为'every day'表示每天。

× When I wake up and I just check my phone and I know what I need to do this day.

✓ When I wake up, I just check my phone and I know what I need to do that day.

'this day'应为'that day'，表示当天。句子中缺少逗号，建议加上。