List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using correct articles ('a list'), verb tenses ('carry' instead of 'carried'), and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

例: Yes, I definitely make a list when I go shopping because I have a poor memory. Therefore, I usually write down the items I need on a piece of paper and carry it with me to the store.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and adding linking words for coherence. Also, use articles correctly ('a list') and avoid minor grammatical mistakes.

例: Honestly, no. I don't make a list for my work because I work part-time and there isn't much to do, so I don't feel the need to make one.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. To improve, use correct conjunctions and articles, and connect your ideas more smoothly.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and others might be good at remembering things, so they prefer not to make a list.

提案: Your answer covers the question well but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improve by using correct articles ('a list'), verb tenses ('didn't have'), and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I always carry it with me, making it easy to check the list. However, when I was a child and didn't have a mobile phone, I used to make lists on paper to remember what to buy.

× Yes, I definitely make list when I go to shop because I'm very bad at remembering things so I usually prefer to write down the things I need to buy on a piece of paper and I carried that people with me to the shopping center.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list when I go shopping because I'm very bad at remembering things so I usually prefer to write down the things I need to buy on a piece of paper and I carry that paper with me to the shopping center.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. 'Go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form. 'Carried that people' is incorrect; it should be 'carry that paper' to refer to the written list. These corrections fix singular/plural and verb usage errors.

× Honestly no, I don't make any list for my work because I work part time and there is not too much to do at my job so there is no need to make list.

✓ Honestly no, I don't make any list for my work because I work part time and there is not too much to do at my job so there is no need to make a list.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Although this is an article error, it relates to the singular/plural issue as well. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I think becauses it takes time or some people might be good at remembering things so they do not prefer to make list.

✓ I think because it takes time or some people might be good at remembering things so they do not prefer to make lists.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' here because it refers to the general concept of making lists, not a single list. Also, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'.

× I prefer to make list on phone becauses it is convenient and we carry phone with us every time so it becomes easy to scroll and to look after the list which we have made.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and we carry our phones with us all the time so it becomes easy to scroll and look after the list which we have made.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate the general action. 'On phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'Carry phone' should be 'carry our phones' to agree in number and possessive pronoun. 'Becauses' is a typo and corrected to 'because'. 'Every time' is better expressed as 'all the time'.

× On the other hand, I used to make list on paper when I didn't had any mobile phones with me in my childhood to recall the things I need to buy.

✓ On the other hand, I used to make lists on paper when I didn't have any mobile phones with me in my childhood to recall the things I needed to buy.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb 'have' should be used, not 'had'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural consistency. 'The things I need to buy' should be 'the things I needed to buy' to maintain past tense consistency.