List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문장이 완성되지 않은 부분이 많습니다. 문장을 명확하게 완성하고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이며, 구체적인 예시를 들어 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. Sometimes, I write it down on my smartphone or just keep it in my mind to remember what I need to buy.

提案: 문장이 불완전하고 어색한 표현이 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work. Recently, I have been writing notes and using a calendar to organize my tasks, which helps me manage my time better.

提案: 의미 전달이 명확하지 않고 문장 구조가 혼란스럽습니다. 이유를 명확히 제시하고, 구체적인 설명과 연결어를 사용하여 답변을 체계적으로 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful to keep track of deadlines. In my experience, making lists helps me stay organized, but others may prefer a more flexible approach.

提案: 문장이 어색하고 의미 전달이 불분명합니다. 선호 이유를 명확히 설명하고, 문장 연결을 자연스럽게 하여 답변을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper, like using a calendar, because it feels more comfortable for me. Writing things down helps me manage my time more precisely.

× Yes, I make lists when I visit. A shop or convenience store.

✓ Yes, I make lists when I visit a shop or convenience store.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'A shop or convenience store' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence.

× For instance, I make. On shopping lists in my mind or? Smartphone memo.

✓ For instance, I make shopping lists in my mind or on my smartphone memo.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains a question mark where it is not appropriate. The sentence should be combined and structured properly to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, uh usually make doing list for my work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'I' and uses incorrect phrasing 'doing list'. The correct term is 'to-do list' and the sentence needs a subject for clarity.

× Recently. For example, I right? I write a note or calendar.

✓ Recently, for example, I write a note or use a calendar.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'right?' incorrectly. Also, 'write a calendar' is incorrect; it should be 'use a calendar'. The sentence needs to be combined and prepositions corrected.

× For my doing list. And for my working.

✓ For my to-do list and for my work.

The phrase 'doing list' is incorrect; it should be 'to-do list'. Also, 'for my working' is awkward; 'for my work' is more appropriate. The sentence fragments should be combined.

× I think it's because by doing that people can make sure their work time and deadlines.

✓ I think it's because by doing that, people can manage their work time and deadlines.

The phrase 'make sure their work time and deadlines' is awkward and unclear. 'Manage' is a better verb here. Also, a comma is needed after 'that' for clarity.

× Their work.

✓ Their work.

This is a sentence fragment and does not add meaning. It should be removed or connected to the previous sentence.

× An in my experience it is more come come then not doing this.

✓ In my experience, it is more common than not to do this.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'more come come then'. It should be corrected to 'more common than not' and structured properly with commas.

× To make a list on paper such as calendar or might not stand in my smartphone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper, such as a calendar, rather than on my smartphone.

The phrase 'might not stand in my smartphone' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence should express preference clearly and use correct prepositions.

× It's because it is more comfortable for me.

✓ It's because it is more comfortable for me.

This sentence is grammatically correct but could be combined with the previous sentence for better flow.

× And by doing that on paper, I can do my work. Exact time.

✓ By doing that on paper, I can do my work at the exact time.

The original sentence is fragmented. 'Exact time' should be connected with a preposition 'at' and combined into one sentence for clarity.