List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it allows me to prioritize important items so I don't waste money on unnecessary things.

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan kalimat agar lebih jelas dan lengkap. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kata atau frasa yang tidak jelas.

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me prioritize tasks so I can complete the most important ones first, which improves my productivity.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan hindari kalimat yang tidak sopan seperti menyebut orang lain "malas". Jelaskan alasan dengan cara yang lebih sopan dan logis.

例: I believe some people dislike making lists because they find it tiring to plan their entire day, and it takes extra time. They might prefer a more spontaneous approach to managing tasks.

提案: Perbaiki kalimat agar lebih jelas dan lengkap. Gunakan kosakata yang tepat dan hindari pemenggalan kalimat yang tidak perlu.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily mark off completed tasks, which helps me track my progress effectively.

× because make please can help me remember whatever I want to buy and with the least.

✓ because making a list can help me remember whatever I want to buy and with the list.

The phrase 'make please' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list' to use the verb in the present participle form correctly after 'because'. This clarifies the action helping the speaker remember items.

× and with the least.

✓ and with the list.

The phrase 'with the least' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'with the list' to refer to the shopping list that helps organize items.

× I can know what's important and not important to by that time,

✓ I can know what's important and not important to buy at that time,

The word 'by' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'buy' (verb) to indicate purchasing items, and 'at that time' is the correct time expression.

× because they have to thinking about whatever they need to do all day from the morning until night,

✓ because they have to think about whatever they need to do all day from the morning until night,

After 'have to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'thinking' should be corrected to 'think'.

× I think they just lazy.

✓ I think they are just lazy.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' to link the subject 'they' and the adjective 'lazy'. The pronoun usage is correct but the verb is missing.

× I prefer to make less on paper because when I do it, I can.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because when I do it, I can

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' as the plural noun referring to multiple items.

× Market of every things that I have done and so it's helped me to track.

✓ mark off everything that I have done and so it helps me to track.

'Market of every things' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'mark off everything' meaning to tick completed tasks. Also, 'it's helped' should be 'it helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Where I'm. Going from my lease.

✓ where I'm going from my list.

The word 'lease' is incorrect; it should be 'list' referring to the shopping or to-do list.