List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Anda perlu memperbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Misalnya, gunakan kata 'prioritize' dengan benar dan perbaiki penggunaan kata kerja.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to prioritize what I need to buy. This helps me shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata agar jawaban lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik bagaimana daftar tersebut membantu pekerjaan Anda.

例: Yes, I make a list when I work. It helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time effectively, so I don't waste time.

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa dan kosakata agar jawaban lebih natural dan mudah dipahami. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan contoh yang jelas. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau membingungkan.

例: Some people prefer to work spontaneously without making lists. For example, my friends often decide what to do based on their feelings or immediate needs.

提案: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan teratur. Jelaskan preferensi Anda dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat. Hindari kalimat yang terputus atau tidak lengkap.

例: I prefer to make to-do lists on paper. I have several notebooks where I write daily, weekly, or monthly tasks to stay organized.

× I calmly make a list on what I'm buying when I'm doing shopping and it just common sense because when I shopping I need to like Priory, which one that I should buy and then which one that I should not buying.

✓ I calmly make a list of what I'm buying when I'm shopping and it is just common sense because when I shop I need to prioritize which items I should buy and which ones I should not buy.

The verb 'shopping' should be used without 'doing' as 'doing shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' itself is a gerund. Also, 'not buying' should be 'not buy' to maintain parallel structure. 'Priory' is a misspelling of 'prioritize'. The phrase 'make a list on' should be 'make a list of'. These corrections improve verb form usage and preposition use.

× So at a time it's make a shopping more efficiency.

✓ So at a time it makes shopping more efficient.

The phrase 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Shopping' is a gerund and used correctly here. 'More efficiency' should be 'more efficient' as 'efficient' is an adjective modifying 'shopping'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and adjective use.

× I make a list when I when I'm doing my work an yes it does because it used to like priority my work and it's not wasting my time.

✓ I make a list when I'm working and yes, it does because it helps me prioritize my work and it doesn't waste my time.

'When I'm doing my work' is better as 'when I'm working' for natural expression. 'Used to like priority' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me prioritize'. 'It's not wasting' should be 'it doesn't waste' to correctly express negation in present tense. These changes fix verb forms and modal verb usage.

× Because some people used to like do their job in a like flow.

✓ Because some people like to do their job in a flow.

'Used to like do' is incorrect; it should be 'like to do'. The preposition 'in a like flow' is awkward; 'in a flow' is correct. This corrects verb form and preposition use.

× So when they were they mostly use their sense to on what they're doing.

✓ So when they work, they mostly use their senses to decide what they're doing.

'When they were' is incorrect; it should be 'when they work'. 'Use their sense to on' is incorrect; it should be 'use their senses to decide'. This corrects tense and preposition use as well as pronoun clarity.

× For example, like my friend, they often like do their job based on what they want an on what if.

✓ For example, my friends often like to do their job based on what they want and on what if.

'Like do' should be 'like to do'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'they'. This corrects verb form and singular/plural agreement.

× I'm a preferred. Make A to do list base on a paper and I have some several books like To Do List book that I have.

✓ I prefer to make a to-do list based on paper and I have several books like To-Do List books that I have.

'I'm a preferred' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer'. 'Base on a paper' should be 'based on paper'. 'Some several' is redundant; 'several' alone is sufficient. This corrects pronoun use, verb form, and quantifier use.

× Usually write the. The release list it usually based on daily. Weekly or monthly?

✓ I usually write the list. The release list is usually based on daily, weekly, or monthly schedules.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding subject 'I' and verb 'write' clarifies the sentence. 'Release list' is unclear but assumed to mean 'to-do list' or 'task list'. Adding 'is' before 'usually based' corrects sentence structure. This fixes sentence fragments and structure.