List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and detailed. Instead of 'while doing shopping', say 'when I go shopping'. Also, add a reason to enrich your answer and use linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Also, connect your ideas smoothly with linking words.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me plan my activities throughout the day, and it gives me clear direction to improve my productivity.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use correct prepositions and avoid repeating words. Provide a clearer explanation with linking words.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they often fail to complete the tasks they have written down, which can be discouraging.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has awkward phrasing and punctuation errors. Use clearer expressions and avoid contradictory statements. Connect your ideas logically.

例: I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because I can check it anytime, and it's more convenient than carrying paper with me.

× It helps me planning my activity during my whole day.

✓ It helps me plan my activities throughout the whole day.

The verb 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'planning' should be corrected to 'plan'. Also, 'activity' should be pluralized to 'activities' to match the context, and 'during my whole day' is better expressed as 'throughout the whole day' for naturalness.

× Anne it gives me a. It gives me a proper direction to improve my work.

✓ And it gives me proper direction to improve my work.

The sentence contains a typo 'Anne' instead of 'And' and an incomplete sentence 'It gives me a.' which is redundant. Combining the ideas into one clear sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× I think on the people don't like making list becaused they they fail to do the task they have listed for that day.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they fail to do the tasks they have listed for that day.

'On the people' is incorrect; 'some people' is appropriate. 'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity. 'Becaused' is a typo for 'because'. 'They they' is a repetition error. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'they have listed'.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see the list whenever I want, so it's better to carry a paper. With me.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see the list whenever I want, so it's better than carrying paper with me.

The phrase 'better to carry a paper. With me.' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'better than carrying paper with me' to correctly compare and use prepositions. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here.