List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store every weekend. I usually check my fridge first to see which groceries are running low, and then I write down the items I need to buy. This helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use clear linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how making lists helps your productivity. Keep sentences concise and natural.

例: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete at work, and it really helps me stay organized. I started this habit about two years ago, and since then, my productivity has improved because I can prioritize and finish tasks on time.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically and avoid vague statements.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it's a waste of time and prefer to rely on their memory. However, I used to think the same, but as I got older, I started making lists and found that it helps me stay organized and reduces stress.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to give a clear topic sentence, then explain why you prefer your phone with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use a notes app that lets me organize tasks into tables. This way, I can easily check off items as I complete them, which helps me keep track of my progress.

× Yes I do make list to her before I sharp Abu every weekend.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for her before I shop at Abu every weekend.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'sharp Abu' seems to be a typo or mishearing; 'shop at Abu' fits the context better.

× Yes I do make list to her before I sharp Abu every weekend.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for her before I shop at Abu every weekend.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this context; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate the beneficiary of the list.

× So what the week I just make a list of things I need to buy one before going to shop.

✓ So during the week, I just make a list of things I need to buy before going to the shop.

The phrase 'what the week' is incorrect; 'during the week' is appropriate. Also, 'one' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'Going to shop' requires the article 'the' before 'shop'.

× Also just make check the my fridge for the groceries that are ending.

✓ Also, I just check my fridge for groceries that are running out.

The phrase 'make check the my fridge' is incorrect; it should be 'I just check my fridge'. The definite article 'the' before 'my fridge' is incorrect because 'my' already specifies the noun. 'Groceries that are ending' is awkward; 'groceries that are running out' is clearer.

× So yes I do make list.

✓ So yes, I do make a list.

Again, 'list' is singular and countable, so it requires the article 'a'.

× Yes I do make a list of things I have to complete it at work and it's actually really helps me a lot.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of things I have to complete at work and it actually really helps me a lot.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'things I have to complete'. Also, 'helps' should agree with 'it' as the subject, so 'it actually really helps' is correct.

× I just started this this kind of exercise like 2 years back and since then I pray there is a kind of like increasing productivity and completing the things on time.

✓ I just started this kind of exercise about 2 years ago and since then I feel there has been an increase in productivity and completing things on time.

'Like 2 years back' is informal and awkward; 'about 2 years ago' is better. 'I pray' is incorrect here; 'I feel' or 'I believe' fits better. 'There is a kind of like increasing productivity' is awkward; 'there has been an increase in productivity' is clearer. 'Completing the things' should be 'completing things' without 'the'.

× Yes it definitely helped me a lot.

✓ Yes, it has definitely helped me a lot.

Since the action started in the past and continues to the present, present perfect tense 'has helped' is more appropriate than simple past 'helped'.

× I'm not sure, but actually you know what? I never used to make lists.

✓ I'm not sure, but actually, you know what? I never used to make lists.

No grammatical error here; sentence is correct.

× But since with the I'm becoming older and I'm started making lists and notes and that helps me a lot.

✓ But as I'm getting older, I've started making lists and notes and that helps me a lot.

'Since with the I'm becoming older' is incorrect; 'as I'm getting older' is correct. 'I'm started' is incorrect; 'I've started' (present perfect) is correct.

× And I think people just don't.

✓ And I think people just don't like making lists.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object; adding 'like making lists' completes the thought.

× I prefer to do it on my phone.

✓ I prefer to do it on my phone.

No error; sentence is correct.

× That app allows me to write down all the.

✓ That app allows me to write down all the items.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'items' or 'things' completes the sentence.

× A list of things under Kanada created tables in there as there is anything required for the table so I can mark that has completed.

✓ A list of things under Canada, created tables in there, so if there is anything required for the table, I can mark it as completed.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks clarity. Reordering and adding missing words improves clarity and grammar.

× So yes I use my phone. To, to, to know, to make notes lists.

✓ So yes, I use my phone to make notes and lists.

The original sentence has repeated filler words and is fragmented. Combining into a clear sentence improves grammar and clarity.